hail

alabaster  h a i l
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                      clouds ~
  remnants of  w i n t e r
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Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:10 PM
Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 11:39 PM
Love how youv written this! And the arrangement of words too! Remnants of winter youv delivered in such an artistic manner! Pleasure reading your hiku! Well done on 1st place’ congratulations!
Jama Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 5:47 AM
Thank you so much Ink for the support.
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