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This is my hometown. One light regulates traffic Ya’ll come back Now heah

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Date: 3/9/2013 12:27:00 PM
Lol, that last line made me laugh! It's like when a little kid hears his grandfather tell stories of the past, and the grandpa begs him to not fall asleep. Believe me I know what a small town is... my grandparents used to live in a Pop. 64 town, no joke! They didn't even have the luxury of traffic lights...
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Date: 1/2/2013 1:18:00 PM
wow. one requirement to know of in this little haikuville. it is very cute, and worth coming back too*LUV~SKAT
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Date: 11/29/2012 9:10:00 PM
John, ha...love the title... and the imagery.. always~ PD
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Date: 11/29/2012 9:13:00 PM
Thanks PD... You're a peach.... Jake
Date: 11/26/2012 2:28:00 PM
Awww, shucks, I love that southern accent!!
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