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This is my hometown. One light regulates traffic Ya’ll come back Now heah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 9, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Lol, that last line made me laugh! It's like when a little kid hears his grandfather tell stories of the past, and the grandpa begs him to not fall asleep. Believe me I know what a small town is... my grandparents used to live in a Pop. 64 town, no joke! They didn't even have the luxury of traffic lights...
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January 2, 2013 at 1:18 PM
wow. one requirement to know of in this little haikuville. it is very cute, and worth coming back too*LUV~SKAT
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November 29, 2012 at 9:10 PM
John, ha...love the title... and the imagery.. always~ PD
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November 29, 2012 at 9:13 PM
Thanks PD... You're a peach.... Jake
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November 26, 2012 at 2:28 PM
Awww, shucks, I love that southern accent!!
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