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Haikus of Day and Night

Light from a hot sun Beams down upon our blue world Another day has come The moon shining down Whirling around our planet Night shows it beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/13/2015 9:30:00 PM
Beginning with the morning sun and ending with the moon. Perfect! I thank God for our beautiful world He has given us to live in. Blessings, ~~Darlene
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:18:00 PM
The imagery is glorious! Brilliant haiku!! Warmest regards. pandita
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Date: 6/25/2015 8:45:00 PM
I like the idea of the moon whirling!! Cool ku! I will be out of town a while. Major problems with Hubbie's parents' health. Leaving tomorrow!
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Date: 6/25/2015 12:12:00 PM
Very descriptive of night and day..I enjoyed reading your work.Thanks for stopping by..Peach ice cream is delish..Sara
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Date: 6/24/2015 5:52:00 PM
Your words are well chosen and convey their meaning well, allowing for a smooth flow of thoughts from line to line. (planer) typo? Emile.
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