Haikus of Day and Night

Light from a hot sun 
Beams down upon our blue world
Another day has come

The moon shining down 
Whirling around our planet 
Night shows it beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gifford Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Beginning with the morning sun and ending with the moon. Perfect! I thank God for our beautiful world He has given us to live in. Blessings, ~~Darlene
Sietesantos Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 1:18 PM
The imagery is glorious! Brilliant haiku!! Warmest regards. pandita
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 8:45 PM
I like the idea of the moon whirling!! Cool ku! I will be out of town a while. Major problems with Hubbie's parents' health. Leaving tomorrow!
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Very descriptive of night and day..I enjoyed reading your work.Thanks for stopping by..Peach ice cream is delish..Sara
Pinet Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Your words are well chosen and convey their meaning well, allowing for a smooth flow of thoughts from line to line. (planer) typo? Emile.
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