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Haiku's Haste

Sweet star storms the skies the wake of sunrays' goodbye in tender twilight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/10/2012 6:12:00 AM
fantastic haiku, could feel the twilight.
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:17:00 PM
great visual, there! Bravo!
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