Haiku's Haste

Sweet star storms the skies
the wake of sunrays' goodbye
in tender twilight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Perritano Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 6:12 AM
fantastic haiku, could feel the twilight.
Buchel Avatar
September 17, 2011 at 5:17 PM
great visual, there! Bravo!
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