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Haikus 2 - 5

Haiku #2 
Careless waters in her mind 
Shallow thoughts of hers 
Lacking depth in her ocean 

Haiku #3 
With an abundance of rain 
Saturate my soul 
Fertilize this seed in me 

Haiku #4 
I've seen mohagony shades 
Walk under street lights 
Smiling, enjoying life 

Haiku #5 
Listening to song birds hum 
Love in the Spring 
Singing joyful sounds of praise

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Gwendolen Song

April 28, 2012 at 6:38 AM

Alas! The greatly awaited haiku series is HERE!...Each has a strong individual presence...they are not related in any way at all, right? I know many people that fall in line with #2...the 3rd sounds so spiritual and beckons the Lord to rain His spirit on you....Oh, if I could be one of the people in the 4th one, just enjoying life and window shopping...great usage of the word mahogany to describe the sunglasses..very special touch. I take a walk on a crisp sunny morning in number 5...it's like a worship service in an old country church. The birds are the choir! Hey Corey! Thanks for this posting! Interesting scenes...Enjoyed a lot! Gwendolen

Corey Brown

April 29, 2012 at 3:17 PM

Thank you so much.