Haiku--R

Rainfall on the roof
sounds like it's dropping critters
can't hear myself think


Copyright McCuen 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 3, 2009 at 2:08 AM
A heavy rain must have been falling pretty hard. Nice work and great use of imagery...Raul
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January 1, 2009 at 9:07 AM
I reckon it all depends on the size of them critters - Great haikus - MJ
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