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                                placed 9th in Brian Strand's Untitled Haiku contest

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Haiku--mild heavenly breeze


mild heavenly breeze
respite from late summer heat
fall waits in the wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:31 AM
Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Canerdy Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 8:29 PM
Just a nice haiku, gentle and sweet! Hugs – Kim
Canerdy Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Thanks a million, Kim! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 2:59 PM
Lucky you. You got on the winner list big congrats on your haiku gem
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 7:40 PM
THANKS so much, Andrea! Janice
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 1:46 PM
I am hoping so. I need the cooler air to flow on in. Thanks for sharing this one with us. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 7:40 PM
Thanks a million, Sara. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 12:43 PM
What a lovely Haiku write you have here. Been hot here. Today around 110. Come on cool days... Have a lovely/blessed day writing away...............
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 7:42 PM
110~~WOW! It was only 90 here (Mississippi). Thanks so much, Paula Janice
Messina Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 11:17 AM
I welcome fall- my favorite season. Winter on the other hand...yuk. Congratulations, Janice on your winning placement!
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Charles, thanks so much. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 9:06 AM
The final line is right on!
Canerdy Avatar
August 30, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Janice
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