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Haiku--Hordes Emerge

hordes emerge from ground
        time for piercing mating call
               unique cicadas
				
May 27, 2018, entered in Maureen McGreavy's Magicicada Contest

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David William Breidenthal

May 28, 2018 at 7:26 AM

This poem is interestingly cool~

Janice Canerdy

May 28, 2018 at 7:30 AM

Thank you so much, JW! Janice

Vijay Pandit

May 28, 2018 at 5:26 AM

And that is how it happens..I remember the sights and sounds just you have depicted..best for a win, Janice.

Janice Canerdy

May 28, 2018 at 7:14 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay! Janice

Daniel Turner

May 27, 2018 at 11:33 PM

I know growing up in MS you are familiar with the cicada. Probably sit on the porch many a night listening to them go on and on. It's one of those sounds that can transport you through time. These were my thoughts after reading your haiku. Good stuff, Janice!!!

Janice Canerdy

May 28, 2018 at 7:21 AM

Thank you so much, Daniel. Haiku writing is hard for me! Janice