Haikuette

SUMMER DAYS
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sweet red tomatoes.
ham-hock, cheese, lettuce, salad.
hot summers day treat.

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#tomato, #salad, #lettuce, #sweet, #ham-hock

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Susan Ashley

March 12, 2018 at 10:35 PM

A delectable little haiku, Mick! Although not a fan of the ham-hock.. lol!

Susan Ashley

March 13, 2018 at 9:06 AM

Oh yes, Mick, I did notice that you stated those differences in your poet's notes.. thank you. Your haikuette is spiced with delicious imagery :)) Warmest wishes my friend!

Mick Talbot

March 13, 2018 at 8:40 AM

Susan, Thanks, yes most definitely delicious, but not a haiku, very similar, however, the only 2 are the syllables and no capital letters, excluding proper nouns. The syllable count of 17 can be spread over/between the 3 lines, and punctuation and titles are permitted... Mick ;-)