Haikuette

SUMMER DAYS ~~~~~~~~~~~~ sweet red tomatoes. ham-hock, cheese, lettuce, salad. hot summers day treat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ #tomato, #salad, #lettuce, #sweet, #ham-hock

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/12/2018 10:35:00 PM

A delectable little haiku, Mick! Although not a fan of the ham-hock.. lol!

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/13/2018 9:06:00 AM

Oh yes, Mick, I did notice that you stated those differences in your poet's notes.. thank you. Your haikuette is spiced with delicious imagery :)) Warmest wishes my friend!

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/13/2018 8:40:00 AM

Susan, Thanks, yes most definitely delicious, but not a haiku, very similar, however, the only 2 are the syllables and no capital letters, excluding proper nouns. The syllable count of 17 can be spread over/between the 3 lines, and punctuation and titles are permitted... Mick ;-)

Silent One

Date: 3/12/2018 2:58:00 PM

Nice one Mick lol

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/13/2018 8:42:00 AM

Silent, Thank you kind sir... Mick

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2018 11:23:00 AM

You're making me hungry,roll on summer.

Mick Talbot
Date: 3/12/2018 11:40:00 AM

Haha, back in the day it was a warm summers day treat, now, rabbit food. tut! Mind you I still enjoy a nice freshly blended salad.