Haiku--C

Cherries in a bowl
cavort  with one another
stops when I swallow

Copyright McCuen 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 6, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Nice use of personification. I enjoyed it. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen
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January 3, 2009 at 2:06 AM
Nice way of ending that one...Raul
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January 1, 2009 at 9:04 AM
MC - I reckon thats one way to shut them up - God Bless, MJ
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