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Haiku Xss

xanthic daffodils
sway on a cool morning breeze
song thrush breaks snail shell

Captcha haiku contest
Sponsored by Harry Horsman

my log in captcha was XSS

8/7/18

birdflowerspringhaiku

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Virginia Waters

September 18, 2018 at 3:08 AM

congrats on placing and lovely spring haiku

Paul Callus

September 18, 2018 at 3:03 AM

Pleased to return with sweet congratulations, Jan :) Well done! Hugs // paul

Mark Toney

September 17, 2018 at 9:30 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win. The images you found are perfect. This is still a FAV for me :)

Line Gauthier

September 17, 2018 at 8:27 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan.

Eve Roper

September 17, 2018 at 7:54 PM

Great Haiku, Jan, feast for a king :) congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Mark Toney

August 9, 2018 at 7:28 PM

I love this, Jan. I think we're looking at a winner. This is a FAV for me. Cheers!

Warren Doll

August 9, 2018 at 10:44 AM

Brilliant haiku, Jan. Good luck in the contest / Warren:)

Jan Allison

August 9, 2018 at 11:28 AM

Thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

August 8, 2018 at 4:36 AM

Wow Jan! What a terrific haiku you managed out of your captcha! I loved thus entry and I think Harry will too! : )

Jan Allison

August 8, 2018 at 4:43 AM

Thanks Connie, I find the first 2 lines of a haiku easy, just struggle with the juxtaposition in the final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

August 8, 2018 at 4:02 AM

Hello Jan, A wondrous image and a marvelous Haiku!! Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jan Allison

August 8, 2018 at 4:34 AM

Thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 8, 2018 at 3:52 AM

- A lovely suggestion Jan, good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

August 8, 2018 at 4:33 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2018 at 5:53 PM

Jan, is that what the contest means?? You make it look so simple. I could not for the life of me understand the contest directions. Now I think I get it and I LIKES it.

Jan Allison

August 7, 2018 at 6:48 PM

Yes this is for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Virginia Waters

August 7, 2018 at 5:04 PM

lovely image

Jan Allison

August 7, 2018 at 5:07 PM

Thanks Virginia:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

August 7, 2018 at 3:24 PM

Nice one Jan!

Jan Allison

August 7, 2018 at 4:20 PM

thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

August 7, 2018 at 3:18 PM

Your lovely imagery serves as a contrast to our hot weather, Jan. At the moment I would give anything for a cool morning/evening breeze! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

August 7, 2018 at 4:20 PM

The weather is much cooler now, still in need of rain but the really hot temperatures have gone for now. You must rest indoors where its cooler and write!!:-) hugs jan xx