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xanthic daffodils sway on a cool morning breeze song thrush breaks snail shell Captcha haiku contest Sponsored by Harry Horsman my log in captcha was XSS 8/7/18

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Virginia Waters

Date: 9/18/2018 3:08:00 AM

congrats on placing and lovely spring haiku

Paul Callus

Date: 9/18/2018 3:03:00 AM

Pleased to return with sweet congratulations, Jan :) Well done! Hugs // paul

Mark Toney

Date: 9/17/2018 9:30:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win. The images you found are perfect. This is still a FAV for me :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/17/2018 8:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jan.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2018 7:54:00 PM

Great Haiku, Jan, feast for a king :) congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

Mark Toney

Date: 8/9/2018 7:28:00 PM

I love this, Jan. I think we're looking at a winner. This is a FAV for me. Cheers!

Warren Doll

Date: 8/9/2018 10:44:00 AM

Brilliant haiku, Jan. Good luck in the contest / Warren:)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2018 11:28:00 AM

Thanks Warren:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2018 4:36:00 AM

Wow Jan! What a terrific haiku you managed out of your captcha! I loved thus entry and I think Harry will too! : )

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2018 4:43:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I find the first 2 lines of a haiku easy, just struggle with the juxtaposition in the final line:-) hugs Jan xx

Gary Bateman

Date: 8/8/2018 4:02:00 AM

Hello Jan, A wondrous image and a marvelous Haiku!! Best of Luck in the contest!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2018 4:34:00 AM

Thanks Gary:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2018 3:52:00 AM

- A lovely suggestion Jan, good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2018 4:33:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2018 5:53:00 PM

Jan, is that what the contest means?? You make it look so simple. I could not for the life of me understand the contest directions. Now I think I get it and I LIKES it.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2018 6:48:00 PM

Yes this is for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Virginia Waters

Date: 8/7/2018 5:04:00 PM

lovely image

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2018 5:07:00 PM

Thanks Virginia:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/7/2018 3:24:00 PM

Nice one Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2018 4:20:00 PM

thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/7/2018 3:18:00 PM

Your lovely imagery serves as a contrast to our hot weather, Jan. At the moment I would give anything for a cool morning/evening breeze! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2018 4:20:00 PM

The weather is much cooler now, still in need of rain but the really hot temperatures have gone for now. You must rest indoors where its cooler and write!!:-) hugs jan xx