Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 78 - a Symbol of Love -

The golden jewels  
Diamonds are forever  
Make  
a ray of sunshine 
 


The diamond petals
You have touched my heart and soul 
So
please Lord bless our love










- SPLIT HAIKUS - 
(syllables 5-7-1-5  http://www.howmanysyllables.com)
Mars 25 - 2016
A-L Andresen :)

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Phyllis Babcock April 17, 2016 at 12:53 PM A nice dual of split haiku. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen April 17, 2016 at 1:31 PM - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, dear Phyllis :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison April 8, 2016 at 10:06 AM absolutely beautiful so romantic Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 8, 2016 at 11:29 AM - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, Jan :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Manmath Dalei April 2, 2016 at 12:50 PM Hi Anne, Lovely haiku.Best of luck for the contest. Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2016 at 1:15 PM - Manmath, many thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta April 2, 2016 at 12:24 PM Good Write. Wishing Best for Contest. Anisha D Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2016 at 12:36 PM - Anisha, thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis April 2, 2016 at 6:30 AM Heavenly haiku. Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2016 at 8:05 AM - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment, Iris :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

M Asim Nehal April 1, 2016 at 1:26 PM Very costly symbol of love....nevertheless full marks...7 Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2016 at 1:30 PM - Yes, very expensive ..... - Thanks for the pleasant visit a 7 and lovely comment, M. Asim :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 31, 2016 at 9:09 AM Rings and diamonds ... a symbol of everlasting love; if the love does not last, then check out the diamonds...they might be fake:) hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2016 at 11:41 AM - Plastic fantastic, very cruel and fake love Paul - Thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty March 30, 2016 at 12:10 PM Splendid! Love Anne Anne-Lise Andresen March 31, 2016 at 11:42 AM - Rajat, thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel March 28, 2016 at 11:48 PM Great haikus:) all the best in the contest:) Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2016 at 4:05 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Nithya Venkat March 28, 2016 at 9:12 PM Beautiful haiku! Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2016 at 4:05 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Nithya :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 28, 2016 at 12:43 PM Enjoyed reading your work..This must be for a contest for I have seen several written like this one..First Haiku last line I think it needs to be reconsidered..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Sara Kendrick March 28, 2016 at 4:08 PM Yes, it is okay but the other line wasn't bad it was just wrong tense or something..I can't remember what..Maybe it was a plural subject with a singular predicate..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2016 at 2:02 PM - I need a new line, a better line :) - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Vera Duggan March 27, 2016 at 7:47 PM Beautiful Haikus Anne Lise, yes the ring is the symbol of love, I am lucky I have two as we renewed our wedding vow's 8 years ago, good luck in the contest and take care....Vera Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2016 at 4:28 AM - Yes, you are one lucky lady, dear Vera ..... a handsome and lovely husband - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comment :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2016 at 6:08 PM Lovely thoughts around the special ring. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2016 at 4:29 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 26, 2016 at 8:26 PM Romantic haiku Anne-Lise. My best wishes for the contest Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2016 at 6:15 AM - Many thanks for the pleasant visit and lovely comments, Nayda :) - hugs //Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath March 26, 2016 at 2:14 PM Beautiful poem to melt one's heart remembering the past, a beautiful symbol of expressing love. Words themselves are tiny stars glittering in the sky of loving heart. 7 sure, loved always my lovely lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2016 at 2:23 PM - Your comments sound like a poem of beautiful words, dear Bl :) - Thanks for the lovely words and a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker March 25, 2016 at 6:01 PM well done my friend..good luck in the contest Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2016 at 1:26 PM - Frederic thanks for visiting and best wishes for the contest, I think will need it :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso March 25, 2016 at 5:52 PM I really enjoyed these, and the photo goes so well in black and white! :) Happy Easter!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2016 at 1:24 PM - I've never heard about "split haikus" .... but fun to try :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - Nice that you enjoyed both photo and message, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)