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Naga, Sun, Musim Panas, Jeruk, Terbang

- Haiku X 71 - Glorious Powers -

Dawn will dim the moon
     With storms to heaven tremble
     Holy harmonies











     09.01.2016
     A-L Andresen :)
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Raven Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 9:48 AM
An excellent Haiku as always Anne-Lise. The words form a glorious vision. Glad i did stop by this write today. Enjoyed the read. It is always a pleasure and an honour to read your Haiku Anne-Lise. A seven and a fav. Hugs....Vladislav. X
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January 19, 2016 at 12:34 PM
- Thanks for your kind words a 7 + fav. (!!!) and visit, Vladislav :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Dear Anne Lise A pleasure to read this morning, simply an excellent read for this beautiful morning, cheri
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January 13, 2016 at 8:08 AM
- A bit warmer poems ..... no snow :))) - Thanks for the visit and comments, dear Cherl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 12, 2016 at 2:04 PM
Lovely words on this haiku. love phyl
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January 12, 2016 at 2:18 PM
- A pleasure that you enjoy this, dear Phyllis - Thank you for many nice comment today, always a pleasure :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Glorious and captivating powers of nature....beautiful! ~ Regards & hugs // paul
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January 12, 2016 at 12:29 PM
- Thanks for your kind words and visit, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 11, 2016 at 7:44 PM
Fascinating use of words in this... wow !!
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January 12, 2016 at 4:37 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments on my Haiku X 71, Debra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 6:47 PM
very lovely, Anne Lise.
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January 11, 2016 at 3:11 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments on my Haiku X 71, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 1:55 PM
beautiful way of receiving both night and day!... happy smiles and huggs, dear anne..
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January 10, 2016 at 2:51 PM
- Thanks for the visit and comments, Nette :) - happy smile and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 10, 2016 at 1:53 PM
Very short poem of few words in the form of Haiku adorned a great concept. 7+++ sure. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 2:52 PM
- Thanks for the visit a 7 +++ and comments - Glad that you enjoy it, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Joseph Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 4:53 AM
nicely written... holy harmonies...
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 5:13 AM
- Thanks for the visit and comments on my Haiku X 71, Andrew - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 10, 2016 at 2:35 AM
Heaven declares God's glory with these trembles, dear Anne. Lovely write. hugs
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January 10, 2016 at 5:13 AM
- Kim, thanks for the visit and comments on my Haiku X 71 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 10, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Glorious, dear Anne- Lise! A seven
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January 10, 2016 at 5:12 AM
- Thanks for the visit a 7 and comments on my Haiku X 71, Demetrios - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 9, 2016 at 11:13 PM
Beautiful pen Anne-Lise!An excellent haiku!Very beautifully painted my dear friend.Just awesome!A 7! Sending you my love n' prayers!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!Hugs!:)D.
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January 10, 2016 at 5:11 AM
- Dorian, thanks for the visit and comments on my Haiku X 71 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 9, 2016 at 4:19 PM
This is so beautiful , great haiku my dear, hugs / / :) dalia
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January 9, 2016 at 4:26 PM
- Nice that you enjoy my haiku, Dalia :) - Thanks for the visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 9, 2016 at 4:08 PM
Anne Lise, this piece made me sit still and silence my brain for a good minute. your pen is graced with depth and beauty..:), jill
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January 9, 2016 at 4:11 PM
- Little things in life we must enjoy, dear Jill - Thanks for the visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sage Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 2:01 PM
excellent haiku there Anne, beautiful...
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January 9, 2016 at 3:47 PM
- Thanks for the visit and comments on my Haiku X 71, W.S. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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