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- Haiku X 55 - You Make My Day -

My wish for the day
Lips that share the love so sweet
Wonderful feelings

Come little closer
Although it's raining outside
You make the world bright






09.05.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

January 25, 2016 at 12:10 PM

I have been editing what I thought was haiku. Thanks to people like you, so versed in the art, I have more to go. Your works illuminate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 25, 2016 at 12:14 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Iris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

June 3, 2015 at 10:22 PM

Anne-Lise, another wonderful poem a 7. Hugs dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 4, 2015 at 7:44 AM

- Eve, thanks for visiting a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

June 1, 2015 at 3:18 PM

Nice romantic write. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 2, 2015 at 4:13 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

May 23, 2015 at 4:06 PM

Beautiful pen Anne Lise!A very sweet and romantic beautifully written haiku my dear friend.Wow!I truly enjoyed this one Anne.You're really very good writing in this form you know that:)Always keeping you and your dad family in my prayers everyday Anne.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:) Hugs!D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 2, 2015 at 4:13 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diane M Quinlan

May 15, 2015 at 7:42 PM

I can see why you like this style of poetry. This is very romantic a thought with a wish for love. I love it!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 16, 2015 at 5:26 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Diane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

May 13, 2015 at 3:10 PM

Sweet and romantic! Lovely words for any day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 13, 2015 at 3:48 PM

- Dear Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

May 13, 2015 at 10:40 AM

A sweet smile with love makes a day sure. Beautifully expressed my lovely friend. 7 i feel. Loved always my lovely lovely friend,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 13, 2015 at 12:29 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

May 11, 2015 at 10:32 PM

Beautiful haiku Anne... thanks for stopping by...hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 12, 2015 at 1:55 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Joseph :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo

May 11, 2015 at 6:55 AM

I'm waiting to read more of your haikus. Where are they?

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2015 at 6:59 AM

- I've written 55 haikus - You are welcome :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

May 11, 2015 at 5:20 AM

sweet beautiful haiku anne lise wishing you a lovely week dear friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2015 at 7:00 AM

- One kiss, calling on the next :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo

May 11, 2015 at 4:37 AM

You never go wrong with haikus and it is abundantly evidenced in this scintillating piece. 7+!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2015 at 4:53 AM

- Small words and love gives life worth living :) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, Hannington :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jonathan Medida

May 10, 2015 at 11:45 PM

this is awesome even in few words, thats why i love haiku

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2015 at 3:02 AM

- Many believe that it is easy to write Haiku - A "lazy" way to write poetry, but I like few word that says a lot :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jonathan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Corrina Leblond

May 10, 2015 at 8:34 PM

Sweet thoughts, few words with big meaning, i love lips that love :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2015 at 2:58 AM

- Not always necessary with many words :) - Thank you for your words and pleasant visit Corrina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

May 10, 2015 at 6:56 PM

May all your wish come true. Happy Mother's Day to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 11, 2015 at 2:55 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Iris :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

May 10, 2015 at 2:20 PM

may you be always be blessed with life's beauty,anne.. splednid 'ku.. happy mom's day!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 2:28 PM

- You make my day, Nette :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

May 10, 2015 at 9:45 AM

That's my wish too and you always make my day. what a beautiful write. I fee so romantic now. you have an amazing talent. my best wishes. Pete.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 12:30 PM

- Let us live for the beauty and small kiss :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

May 10, 2015 at 8:35 AM

This is so lovely and so sweet my dear friend, Anne Lise! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Thank you so much for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for your kind visit and inspiring words on my poem. Have a blessed day my dearest friend! Happy Mothers Day as well although your celebration there is Feb. Here in Thailand, we'll again celebrate in Aug. on the Princess' birthday. Wishing you a great weekend! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 12:44 PM

- I thank you my friend Leonora, for the blessing you are ... for the pleasure in your words ... ... and for the warmth in your hugs - <3 and hugs right back to you // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

May 9, 2015 at 6:34 PM

My Dear Anne-Lise . . . Most Enchanting indeed! And a "7." Best Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 12:33 PM

- Small words and love gives life worth living :) - Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and comments, dear friend Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

May 9, 2015 at 5:14 PM

Luscious lips -- a hot wire to my heart!! Lovely Ms. Andresen

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 12:18 PM

- Do you know, David ? - How to get beautiful lips (?) ..... say only good words :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

May 9, 2015 at 4:42 PM

Short, sweet and to the point, this Haiku is beautiful.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 12:03 PM

- It is the ability to see and experience the beauty that makes people to be human - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

May 9, 2015 at 4:21 PM

Passionate work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for dropping by..In Nepal, I am sure that it will take a long time to heal..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 11:55 AM

- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

May 9, 2015 at 3:58 PM

We cant wish more anything more Anne Lise:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 12:08 PM

- As beautiful as life itself ... a small kiss :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

May 9, 2015 at 12:21 PM

Lovely 'ku! Soupmail. HUgs! Kim :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 11:58 AM

- I am so glad you are here - it helps me to understand how beautiful the world is :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

May 9, 2015 at 11:32 AM

I won't let my husband ever live the house without a kiss, you never know what the future brings. Love your poem , Anne-Lise, a 7, sorry my mind wondered off.

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2015 at 11:52 AM

- Kiss him and tell that you love him - None can not rewind the time, Eve - Thanks for the nice visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)