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- Haiku X 49 - the Scream -

- Haiku X 49 - THE SCREAM -


All out of nothing 
No echo of man lingers
Screaming in silent 





18.03.2015 A-L Andresen :)
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Phyllis Babcock

March 25, 2015 at 1:37 PM

Well said on this haiku Anne Lise. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 25, 2015 at 1:59 PM

- Thanks for visit and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser

March 24, 2015 at 9:24 AM

And we scream and scream and scream and are not heard. An excellent poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 24, 2015 at 12:48 PM

.... we do .... - M.L., thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Njeri Hunjeri

March 23, 2015 at 2:46 AM

Super strong words!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 23, 2015 at 4:05 AM

- Njeri, thanks for visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak

March 21, 2015 at 8:10 AM

WOW! Very profound.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 21, 2015 at 12:17 PM

- Thank you, my friend Monterey :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

David Meade

March 20, 2015 at 4:11 PM

A powerful haiku, only in the silence can we hear eternity. Nicely done 7

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 21, 2015 at 12:16 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7 and lovely comments David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

March 20, 2015 at 3:21 PM

Very deep write and well expressed Anne...hug

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2015 at 3:44 PM

- Thank you, my friend Joseph :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez

March 20, 2015 at 7:48 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, I wonder what prodded this to flow from your pen. I hope it's just a product of your keen observation about the thousand facets of man. Whatever it is, it has resulted in an outstanding piece. A 7. Hope you have a great day. God bless you. Hugs! :) Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2015 at 1:58 PM

- Yes, simply observation about the thousand facets of man Kim :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phatt Matt

March 20, 2015 at 3:34 AM

letting it all is the point and you said it clearly to me at least. you are true to your 'penmanship'' matt i'm out peace!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2015 at 3:46 AM

- Thank you, Phatt Matt :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler

March 19, 2015 at 11:12 PM

Sometimes, the loudest screams are never heard... So much emotion is expressed here in just three short lines. Really great poem, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2015 at 2:55 AM

- Thank you, my friend Kelly :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid

March 19, 2015 at 6:01 PM

really love how this drew anne lise excellent pen dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful evening

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2015 at 2:55 AM

- Thank you, my friend Liam :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

March 19, 2015 at 3:08 PM

vivid imagery from your creative mind, anne... wow!..hope you are well.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 20, 2015 at 2:54 AM

- Thank you, my friend Nette :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Hannington Mumo

March 19, 2015 at 7:08 AM

I didn't think that the smallness of a haiku could allow such didactic expression, kudos!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2015 at 8:49 AM

- Not always we need so many words, Hannington :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

March 19, 2015 at 6:44 AM

Silent screams can be the most significant, Anne Lise!! They can also serve as a safety valve! All the best. /x/ paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 19, 2015 at 9:00 AM

- Thank you, my friend Paul :) - hugs Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

March 18, 2015 at 12:54 PM

Cool and powerful poem my lovely friend. i feel 7++ here. D.P.Potter rightly commented, you have golden pen. Loved always,bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 18, 2015 at 1:24 PM

- Dear friend Bl, thanks for the nice visit, a 7, lovely comments and S-mail - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

March 18, 2015 at 11:06 AM

Powerful pen Anne Lise!By the title this is a very deep sad and provoking haiku, my dear friend.A 7 from me!I hope all is well with you.Keeping you and your dad in my prayers everyday. Take good care now.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 18, 2015 at 1:21 PM

- Thanks for the nice visit, a 7, lovely comments and prayers - My father becomes weaker and weaker every day - thank you for asking, my friend Dorian - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)