- Haiku - X 3 - Cat -

Lies in shadow
      A striped sleepy cat
         Summer heat




15.10.2012
A-L  Andresen :)
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Crocker Avatar
July 23, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Very good! Thank you for sharing.
Dodd Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 9:47 PM
Nice haiku! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 2:22 AM
Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Lacy. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Johnson Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 3:37 PM
Sounds like Garfield waiting for some lasangne. :) Enjoy your haiku's.
Andresen Avatar
October 26, 2012 at 2:42 AM
Robert,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 4:09 AM
I loved it on my first read!Very good haiku .Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my poetry pages:)
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 12:22 PM
Kash,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Comporozos Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 1:19 AM
An authentic haiku indeed, capturing the moment as Black-eyed Susan has said
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 2:10 AM
Vassilis,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Susan Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 7:40 AM
great descriptions - you really captured the moment here :)
Andresen Avatar
October 22, 2012 at 11:34 AM
B.E.S.,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Haick Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Love this, Anne Lise! Well done...perfect image here! Hope you enjoyed the weekend. Much love, Annalise
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 11:49 AM
Annalise,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Moore Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 4:03 AM
I can just imagine the cat all curled up..Thanks for always visiting my site and commenting on my poems. You always say such nice and uplifiting thoughts. When you get a minute, read my Haiku 1. I'm not sure how to write them, my last line you have to figure out how it coincides with the first two. xxoo Holly
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 4:47 AM
Harry,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 4:47 AM
-sorry- Holly :) :)
Horsman Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 9:57 AM
does not like sunbathing, intelligent cat you have, like this, Anne Lise, like this alot....
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 10:37 AM
Harry,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Alvez Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 8:31 PM
Ah! Sweet - Sweet versing! Cynthia
Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 12:51 AM
Cynthia,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Yamin Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 1:13 PM
A beautiful Haiku strictly confining to the number of syllables permissible, like walking on a tight rope. Thanks Anne for your very kind comments on my poem The Cry of Heart. The beauty of Quatrains (in Persian called RUBAI'YAT) is they are quotable. Love. -Mohammad
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Mohammad,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Goller Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 8:39 AM
that's a lovely Haiku, thanks for sharing it, God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Erich,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 10:16 AM
Nice and acute. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 10:25 AM
bl,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Komala Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 10:05 AM
so lovely written ...like your Haiku..thanks Anne for your nice visit and comments ..Enjoyed !!! <3<3<3 SK
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Sukmawati,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Goff Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 4:59 AM
sweet.....nice like you....jimbo
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 6:45 AM
James,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:20 PM
OH A PERFECT VISION OF MY OWN TWO CATS .. GABRIEL AND EXCALIBUR .. CALI FOR SHORT .. AH SO GRAND ANNE-LISE .. MEOW .. HAPPY DAY LUV
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:42 PM
Linda-Marie,appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:19 PM
This is good Anne Lise. Like the cat I' getting sleepy too. right now here in Texas we are having rain weather and that gets me sleepy' Have a great day. Lucy
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:41 PM
Lucilla, appreciate your visit and thank you for your comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Harrell Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 11:32 AM
Make me want to take a nap too. Love the summer. Now we have to wait till the next hot day. Nice Haiku, Anne-Lise. Love ya, Toquyen
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Toquyen. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Neels Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 11:27 AM
Anne Lise, love the imagery in this one. Hope you are enjoying a relaxing evening tonight.. Thank you for liking my picture ;) love & hugs Wilma
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Wilma. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Lewis Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 8:21 AM
So few words and yet a great visualization. Have a pleasant week!
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Patricia. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Sitar Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Just brilliant! Love from Croatia
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Zeljko. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Campi Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 4:07 AM
I like this one. Dogs and cats seem to have it made. At least, our pets do.
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 5:14 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Jancarl. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:22 PM
Excellent haiku here Anne.Enjoyed the read.
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:33 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Kash. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:20 PM
i can see this, just wish i could feel the summer heat...nice haiku!
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:33 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Sandra. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:18 PM
Good evening Anne, thank you for the comment. well..i like this image,,, at least the cat in your haiku is not black... enjoyed..pd
Andresen Avatar
October 16, 2012 at 2:32 AM
Thanks for your visit and your comments. - Pleasant that you visit my poetry Linda. - oxox love from Anne-Lise :)
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