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12.05.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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A Spring Haiku

Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
1st place in the contest
 

- Haiku X 358 - blue path -

                                                spectacular view
                                        the spring savage gyrations -
                                             path with blue lupines
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Buehler Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:10 PM
The path of blue blooms is a wonderful place to be! Congratulations on your first place win. :)
Guptar Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations dear poetess on your top win in this contest with a lovely write. Also appreciated the splendid view. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Kitchin Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 11:35 AM
Anne-Lise, a beautiful haiku and imagery, love lupines. Congratulations on your first place win.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 10:06 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "blue path" Haiku write again. Great/pretty picture. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win..........
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your top winning placement with this excellent haiku, Anne-Lise
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Back with congrats! Lovely to read again!
Mckeithan Avatar
May 23, 2025 at 6:04 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Wonderful poem with the picture.
Beaufort Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 5:44 AM
Anne-Lise, that's a remarkable picture. Amazing when there is a place with one kind of bloom that stretches for as far as we can see. Thanks for sharing it. Is it a view near where you live?
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 9:43 AM
- I have my garden full of lupines ... but this is a "borrowed" photo :) - Many thanks for your comment Duke :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 3:17 AM
One wonders how exhilarating is to walk that path. Sweet poem dear Anne Lise. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2025 at 4:08 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Victor :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 4:12 PM
Draws us in! Sweet to walk that path!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Yes, beautiful :) - Many thanks for your comment, Kim :) - hugs
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2025 at 3:39 PM
What wonderful flowers they are
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 11:39 AM
- Thank you very much... I have a garden full of lupines... they grow wild, Andrea :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 1:01 PM
Spectacular imagery that portrays many incredible layers of sense. Well-done Anne-LISE
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2025 at 11:38 AM
- Thank you very much for your lovely comment, Las :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Great haiku with nice picture.
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:16 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Jay :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 11:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "blue path" write. What A Pretty Blue Flower Picture You Have Here. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful day/week writing away...........
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2025 at 12:16 PM
- Thank you very much for your comment, Paula :) - hugs
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