- Haiku X 34 - Rainy Days -

The rain splashing down 
murmur of the mountain streams 
Autumn will come now 


With overnight rain 
Grows higher every minute 
Dry feet wear high boots








Contest Name: Rainy Days 
Sponsor: Leonora Galinta

- Thanks for my 1st place in the contest, Leonora :)


12.09.2014
A-L Andresen :)
 
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Hicks Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 1:46 AM
You know me, Anne. I'm a sucker for the haiku and these ones are good. Here in Idaho we have lots of murmuring mountain streams. And they are never slow but very fast!
Andresen Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 2:23 AM
..... And my haiku has become better with practice :))) - Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Timothy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 12, 2014 at 3:06 PM
Excellent haiku with beautiful imagery! Congratulations on a wonderful win for a wonderful write! Best regards. Pandita
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October 13, 2014 at 4:20 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Pandita :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mohn Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:25 PM
love your haiku Anne Lise...congrats
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 5:25 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, David :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 10, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your 1st place win for your delightful Haiku. Sandra
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October 10, 2014 at 3:14 PM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Sandra :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Congrats on your win Anne
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 11:34 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats,Joseph :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kimathi Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 9:16 AM
Showers of applause to your winning piece Anne Lise! I love your haiku! ^_^
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October 10, 2014 at 9:52 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats,Teddy :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nair Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Terse and lovely. Congrats, . A.l.
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 8:55 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Jag. :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your winning poem Anne Lise
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October 10, 2014 at 8:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Brenda :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 6:09 AM
Nicely penned haiku with fine images, Anne, congrats
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 7:40 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Dr.Ram :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 4:34 AM
absolutely delightful haikus Anne lise many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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October 10, 2014 at 7:40 AM
- Thank you for friendly visit and congrats, Jan :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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October 10, 2014 at 2:51 AM
Congratulations my dearest poet friend Anne Lise. I thoroughly enjoyed your wonderful write! Thank you so much for sharing and your loving support. Hugs and cheers! Love lots, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 3:31 AM
- Thanks for my 1st place in the contest, dear friend Leonora :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 24, 2014 at 1:51 PM
looking out the windows its raining funny enough beautifully penned dear friend
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 2:29 PM
- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 8:13 AM
The only thing better than a rainy day is a rainy day in autumn. You captured them both.
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September 18, 2014 at 8:59 AM
- Dear Monterey, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 14, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Very nice haiku suits Anne Lise! Love the imagery! :) be back to read you some more soon. Cheers! xxxxxx D.
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September 14, 2014 at 6:46 PM
- Dorian, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 9:29 PM
Well done Haiku Anne Lise
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 5:08 AM
- Brenda, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:32 PM
wohoooo!!!how i love to enjoy the freedom it brings.. on rainy days... very well written, my friend Anne .. ^_^
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 3:46 PM
- My friend AiyaH, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Excellent. Beautiful one. Enjoyed . Tfs
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:24 AM
- Ravi, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 13, 2014 at 1:23 AM
Lovely haikus Anne Lise! U mean flooding rains n that's why high boots ??
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:23 AM
- REALLY MUCH RAIN..... Yes, flooding rains !!!! - Dr. Upma, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 12:19 AM
These are lovely entries for the contest Anne Lise. I love the rain and the fresh scent it leaves when it stops. I love how you express the rain having a voice.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:26 AM
- The rain has a voice .... music, Connie :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 11:50 PM
I love the sound of rain but not being out in it. Nice haiku Anne Lise. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:27 AM
- Get out and dance in the rain, dear Phyllis :) - Thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 7:12 PM
great one, anne lise! i enjoyed...
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:28 AM
- Ilene, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 5:26 PM
Wonderful girl, smile a lot this weekend :)
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:29 AM
:) ) ) - Casarah, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Happy weekend :) hugs Tim
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September 13, 2014 at 5:19 AM
- Happy weekend, Tim :)
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September 12, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Classical rhythm, I feel here. Beautifully done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:29 AM
- Dear bl, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yvonne Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 1:50 PM
I love this paired haiku. I hope you rank high in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2014 at 5:30 AM
- Maurice, thanks for the nice visit and comment on my Haiku: - Rainy Days - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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