Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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17.11.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 339 - hailstorm -

                                      they pelted and bounced
                                  hydromassage swimming pool -
                                          ground force landing

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Duke Beaufort November 25, 2024 at 10:50 AM Anne-Lise, funny that the message pool gets that kind of treatment. Those stones travel down from some pretty high altitudes.

Darlene De Beaulieu November 18, 2024 at 3:55 PM Hello Sunshine smile, hail stones can do a lot of damage. I hope it does not last to long. Hugs. /Darlene/

Sara Kendrick November 18, 2024 at 4:29 AM This is a very excellent one. Hail can do so much damage, but it is an exciting unexpected happening of nature. Thanks for sharing this work with us. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough November 17, 2024 at 9:13 PM I love the sound of hail, but I stay indoors. I like this excellent haiku about an earth phenomenon.

John Read November 17, 2024 at 11:38 AM Wow that is some storm Anne. Xx

Tom Cunningham November 17, 2024 at 11:24 AM I wouldn't want to be out walking in that lol I've heard they can be quite big and cause dents to cars. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2024 at 11:33 AM - I was out for a walk with my two dogs in this weather today, Tom - They sting my cheek - hugs