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29.03.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 320 - footprint -

                                          every step erased
                                       incoming tide mystery - 
                                            the gordian knot
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McBride  Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 4:59 PM
Beautiful poem to leave one thinking of this powerful message : ) hugs
Beaufort Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Anne-Lise, love this. Indeed we can't stop the flow of nature. Only nature itself will do it, although we might try. And this is only the tip of the iceberg.
Kitchin Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 2:37 PM
Anne-Lise, a great haiku, love the mystery of the footprint being erased by the waves. -Hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 1:21 PM
What a great Haiku write with a great picture. I love the beach but no beach near me. Hugs... Have a blessed day/week...........................
Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 3:14 PM
I like this one. Amazing what water can do to change the shoreline. I enjoyed reading your Haiku. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. What kinds of birds are in your area. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 1:37 PM
Love it! Footprint completely erased.
One Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 6:59 AM
You are so good at these.. this is brilliant once again..
Proxenos Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 6:00 AM
Another awesome Haiku from you dear friend, but whatever form you write in, and you are quite adventurous with all and any different forms and competitions in which you do so well. Hope you are enjoying your change of seasons and getting ready for your summer. Lots of love to you, often think of you. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 1:28 PM
There will come a time when all mankind's footsteps will be erased. Happy Easter Anne-Lise, just back from travelling again. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Empress Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 11:22 AM
What a gorgeous picture youve used for this haiku. A deep and touching one that is so well crafted and delivered. I love “ incoming tide mystery” that hits strong . Pleasure always reading your work. Hope easter holidays are going well. Sending you light always
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