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25.03.2024
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 319 - joy -

                                       frost under countdown
                                   gauzy veil on winding stream -
                                            prominent status

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Duke Beaufort

March 31, 2024 at 6:29 PM

Anne-Lise, this reminds me of some of the scenery in Alaska, but the stream you show looks more clear than what I have seen in North America. The picture is truly beautiful.

Victor Buhagiar

March 27, 2024 at 3:36 AM

Beautiful nature haiku. Loved it. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2024 at 11:03 PM

That middle line is so lovely!

Hilda Greenhough

March 26, 2024 at 9:11 PM

Cool poem of changing weather, i can see the veil over the stream.

Robert Gorelick

March 26, 2024 at 7:41 PM

Spring in Norway, you are blessed. You have unveiled a vernal paradise, Anne-Lise. Robert

Joseph May

March 26, 2024 at 4:02 PM

frost is yielding to spring, Nicely penned Anne, hugs

Jan Allison

March 26, 2024 at 3:58 PM

what a delightful haiku Anne-Lise I especially love the imagery in the middle line:-) you excel at this form! hugs Jan xx

Marugu Mo

March 26, 2024 at 12:46 PM

This is a beautiful poem Anne-Lise

Silent One

March 26, 2024 at 6:12 AM

Wonderful imagery as always my friend..

Ink Empress

March 25, 2024 at 2:06 PM

How beautiful, is the picture and also your haiku, so creative and artistically delivered dear anne lise; i bet norway is a beautiful place too and your environment would inspire you to be so creative with your poems. Loved this. Pleasure always reading your work; sending you light always

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 26, 2024 at 2:45 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Ink :) - hugs

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