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24.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Haiku X 299 - a sigh -

                                              volatile moment
                                       apricot-colored sky vaults -
                                               unforgettably
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Beaufort Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 12:07 PM
It is a remarkable moment when the sun is setting or rising. There are so many different kinds of twilight and coloration. Each one is unique and a pleasure to contemplate.
Empress Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Apricot coloured sunsets are my absolute faves! This truly is a gorgeous scene that you’ve captured in the form of haiku dear anne lise. I absolutely loved reading this and the picture used too is so divine and mesmerizing. Sending you light always
Sands Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Beautifully Haiku! I love it :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 8:05 AM
What a sight to see! Thanks for making it appear in my horizon, dear!
Poet Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 7:55 AM
Anne-Lise, your Haiku is well crafted and the image is breathtaking. An enduring piece of literature,
Brotherton Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:46 PM
A wonderful haiku, my friend. It matches perfectly with your photo.
McBride  Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 4:46 PM
This is beautiful, I love it, you find the most beautiful pictures and express them so elegant, hugs ,<3
Rose  Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 1:01 PM
this is truly unforgettable, :)
Bauer Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 11:24 AM
beautiful poem and the picture is amazing as well! nicely done, anne-lise...
One Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Lovely imagery, especially in the second line... volatile is an interesting choice for description in this one.. which means it has a deep meaning behind it..
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 9:50 AM
- I always try to put a deep meaning in my haikus... that's why haikus are so exciting... I love writing them :) - Many thanks, S.O. :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:41 AM
Incredibly beautiful, both picture and haiku. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 9:52 AM
- Nature is beautiful, my friend Victor ... the older I get ... the more I appreciate it :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs
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