Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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27.07.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen

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- Haiku X 284 - Crystal Water -

                                     when sweet and sour mixed
                                         the boot full of july rain -
                                            season's dole a fack

                                           a good day for ducks
                                       rippling rings in the puddle -
                                               water lily balm

                                            enters the gray zone
                                          a temporary cloudburst -
                                             the guardians guard

                                         drifting down the stream
                                      thunder rise and suther round -
                                            plaintive evening song

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Jean Murray July 30, 2023 at 2:04 AM Lovely as always the unusual words in unusual ways Anna-Lise.

Joanna Daniel July 29, 2023 at 7:43 AM A lovely collection of haikus, Anne-lise, I love your language:)

Mike Gentile July 29, 2023 at 6:44 AM Anne-Lise, your haiku suite is full of such thoughtful and beautiful imagery! I really enjoyed reading them this morning !! Happy Saturday xxoo

Sotto Poet July 28, 2023 at 8:05 AM Anne-Lise your collection of Haiku exudes ethereal beauty, each verse encapsulating a fleeting moment of profound significance. The arduous task of selecting a favorite becomes an impossible feat, for every piece is meticulously crafted, leaving one spellbound. Anne-Lise Andresen August 29, 2023 at 12:41 PM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Las :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit July 28, 2023 at 4:14 AM Beautiful poem, Anne-Lise. Your photo is awesome! Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2023 at 7:37 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick July 28, 2023 at 3:01 AM I like the line plaintive evening song. That little one looks as if he/she is having the time of their lives. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2023 at 3:05 AM - Children are not too concerned about the weather ... always find something exciting .... many thanks for your words, Sara :) - hugs

Ilene Bauer July 27, 2023 at 4:20 PM this is lovely, anne-lise! adorable picture, too... Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2023 at 3:03 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Ilene :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu July 27, 2023 at 3:58 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, Oh such a lovey poem of nature. I will make it my fav. Hugs./Darlene\ Darlene De Beaulieu July 28, 2023 at 10:45 AM Hello Sunshine Smile, You are welcome. Hugs./Darlene\ Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2023 at 3:02 AM - Thank you for your nice comment and your fave of my poem, Darlene :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes July 27, 2023 at 3:18 PM A beautiful set of Haiku's Anne-Lise Each one capturing a precious moment. Hard to pick a favorite, but mine has to be the boot full of July rain. I think we have all experienced that when we were kids. Well done, Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2023 at 3:01 AM - I loved puddles as a child, my boots were always wet :))) - Thanks for the nice comment, S.V. :) - hugs

Deb M July 27, 2023 at 2:16 PM Hi Sunshine…..what a lovely poem and an adorable picture! Debx Anne-Lise Andresen July 28, 2023 at 2:59 AM - Many thanks for the lovely comment, Deb :) - hugs