- Haiku X 27 - Storms -

The constant struggle
                           There's a storm inside my head
                           Someone please save me



  



      02.07.2014
      A-L Andresen :)
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Chakrabarty Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 8:26 AM
I can connect up with this idea Anne Lise 24X7. Love. It's enormous. _____:-) rajat
Andresen Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:10 AM
- Rajat, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Hate to say it but ME TOO....BOOM!!!!!!
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 5:37 AM
- A feeling we all have sometimes - ..... but the storm will disappear .... and the sun will come back ! - JSL, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Khan Avatar
July 27, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Wooh! that is so so true A-L Andresen :) :) Thank you for your lovely words and visit on my page :)
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2014 at 3:10 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Saba. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Belle Avatar
July 22, 2014 at 6:16 PM
Time and again confusing thoughts are there to haunt us. Nicely said, Anne Lise. LoveLots, Ara
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2014 at 2:26 AM
- Arabelle, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Gosh I can relate to this one Anne Lise, Hugs Jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
July 21, 2014 at 4:05 AM
- Jan, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 4:09 PM
I think we all have those storms inside our heads. Well said Anne Lise. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 12:42 PM
- Phyllis, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mezhibovskiy Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 7:30 PM
I feel like this a lot. Thank you for the beautiful haiku.
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:50 AM
- Boris, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
De La Luna Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:38 PM
love this, Anne :) words can save..this haiku can
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 3:47 PM
- Hija de la luna, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
July 12, 2014 at 7:50 PM
A lovely haiku Anne...best wishes
Andresen Avatar
July 13, 2014 at 6:01 AM
- Joseph, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Nance Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 12:50 PM
I know that feeling, sometimes those are the worst storms. hope you are okay girl (hugs)
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 1:45 PM
- Everything is O.K. - No storm in my head :))) - Casarah, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 6:17 AM
I enjoyed your storm - I love haiku. Thank you for your visit to my poetry. God bless you.
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 7:44 AM
- Regina, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kaur Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 4:02 AM
This style is my favorite Anne-Lise. Saying a lot with less and you've done it perfectly!! Loved it- Jagjot
Andresen Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 4:30 AM
- Jagjot, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 3:25 AM
Excellent Haiku. Sad too. Tfs
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 8:10 AM
- Ravi, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Enriquez Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 3:01 AM
Dear Anne-Lise: Very nice fragment here. Please check my work "Haiku Surreal 5" which is for you. Enjoy! Leon
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 8:09 AM
- Leon, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 2:02 AM
a brief storm just passed by, so i relate, anne.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 8, 2014 at 8:08 AM
- Nette, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dome Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 4:35 AM
A sad write Anne Lise, says so much with few words hope it's not true and your ok. Well done best wishes. Pete.
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 5:11 AM
- Everything is O.K. - No storm in my head :))) - Peter, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:56 PM
a sunday's best to you, anne.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:31 AM
- Happy Sunday,Nette !! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 4:04 PM
powerful haiku here, my friend
Andresen Avatar
July 6, 2014 at 3:30 AM
- Jack, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Boy do I understand the storms that rocks your weary mind, it's the hurricane of the poetic heart of inspiration. The best way to be of help is to tell you I'm hear is you need a friendly ear and tell you I deal with the storm within me by meditation and closing my eyes and just letting it go sometimes. Another thing I do is just run a hot bubble bath, shut off your phone, light a few sented candles shut off the bathroom light and just relax, relax and listen to soft tunes, cheri
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 5:36 AM
- A hot bubble bath .... scented candles ... no phone ...soft music .... sounded delicious out :)) - thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Palmer Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 3:43 PM
on my way,here comes help,nice write Anne
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 5:32 AM
- A pleasure that you will help, Richard :)) - thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 3:26 PM
Nice to see you here today Light & Love!
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 5:30 AM
- Dear Debbie, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:58 PM
Nice write! Captures that inner turmoil that we all face from time-to-time... it's okay to listen to the voices, but you don't always have to obey them!! :-)
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 3:02 PM
- You are absolutely right! - Glad you took the time to read both of my haiku poem :) - Thank you, John. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:16 PM
You've penned a very beautiful poem/haiku out of those inspiring stormy poems my dear friend Anne Lise. Hope i've enough time this Sunday to go and read them, too. Thank u so much for sharing. Thank u so much as well again for your very kind visit. I wish you all the best as well. Have a great weekend to you and your loved ones. God bless! Many sweet hugs! love lots, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 2:47 PM
- Thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS -dear friend Leonora - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 7:30 AM
Enjoyed reading your stormy Haiku..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 8:26 AM
- Sara, thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 4:52 AM
Glad to see you're not giving in that easily! Storms come and go...we just have to hold on tight while they last. Take care. /x/ paul
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 8:26 AM
... never give up!! - Paul,thanks for your nice visit and comments on my: - Haiku X 27 - STORMS - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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