- Haiku X 245 - Legend -

the first Christmas rose
                           it grew up where her tears fell ~
                                     Jesus in the crib








18.12.2022
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beautychristmasflowerhaiku

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Kim Rodrigues

December 29, 2022 at 6:48 PM

Lovely…

Jennifer Proxenos

December 21, 2022 at 4:17 AM

A little prayer - that is how I see this Haiku, and the passion with which it was written. You are such a tender person, bless you my friend. Love and hugs, Jennifer

Sara Kendrick

December 20, 2022 at 1:47 PM

Good one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Bobby May

December 20, 2022 at 5:10 AM

Perfect Sis! Love Ya have a great holiday!

Victor Buhagiar

December 20, 2022 at 1:19 AM

What a lovely haiku. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

December 19, 2022 at 11:09 AM

A beautiful write and picture. I love them both. Hugs...............

Sally Eslinger

December 19, 2022 at 9:45 AM

Brilliant! Glorious! Surely you worked directly for God on this one! The final line held such an Ahh-Haa haiku moment for me that my body froze. I had to mark it a Fav even before commenting. The whole of it should be a quote. I thank you. God bless you! And…Merry Christmas! hugs,sally

Stephan McBride

December 19, 2022 at 5:37 AM

This is beautiful those tears of hers would turn to a child that gives living water, that's floods our enemy out within and flourishes this new seed , love ya

Mystic Rose Rose

December 19, 2022 at 3:42 AM

Jesus was and still is the most beautiful Christmas rose on earth and heaven Sunshine. Your scented words don't go passed me, Merry Christmas dear friend, love and hope hand in hand, its in the sand ,