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- Haiku X 241 - a Cold Dive -

his mind is engaged
                             cold dive into the fresh snow - 
                                              in search of a mice








07.12.2022
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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December 8, 2022 at 11:02 AM
His expression is one of unwavering resolve. Quite a wonderful likeness, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 11:07 AM
- He knows what he wants ... :)
Buhagiar Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 5:57 AM
Do mice survive the snow?
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:02 AM
- Yes, they do ... we often see mice in the snow ... last winter we had to catch them ... there were so many -
Messina Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 3:11 AM
Amazing how they can find critters beneath the snow. Lovely, Anne-Lise. I read your comments to me...Thank you, my dear friend. Stay safe and warm as the snow falls this morn. Hugs Charlie
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:04 AM
- Winter is no problem for mice ... they survive ... but I don't have a cat :) -
Daniel Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:55 PM
Love the picture and the haiku, Anne-lise:)
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:04 AM
- Thanks, Jo :) -
Volumes Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 4:19 PM
Will he find any under the snow? Such a lovely picture you paint Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:06 AM
- No problem, Wendy ... as long as the snow is "soft" -
Rodrigues Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:39 PM
So cute! I can picture it!
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 6:06 AM
- Thanks, Kim :) -
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:13 PM
I guess he wanted a frozen treat. LOL..Enjoyed reading this one today. I got a chuckle. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:25 PM
- can be thawed in the microwave in one minute, Sara :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs
Hinshaw Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:05 PM
You've got a top winner, here, Anne-Lise! Good luck in the contest and God Jul to you and your family - Bob H
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 1:08 PM
- Many thanks for your comment and wishes, Bob :) - (this is not for contest) - I wish you a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:55 AM
He looks determined! Splendid portrait, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 11:03 AM
- He is focused on his prey - Thanks, Vijay :) -
Cunningham Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Good one Anne, he'll soon find his way back in to curl up by the fire. Tom
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:48 AM
- Definitely ... - Thanks, Tom :) -
Logan Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:26 AM
So, that's what a snow cat looks like? ha ha! Love these lines, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:31 AM
- ... yes ,this is a "snow cat" literally :) - Thanks, Jenna :) -
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