Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 22 - Winter X 4 -

1.          White silver crystals
                     winter coat over a garden bench
                     Summer dreams
                        
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        2.         Outside the window
                    the virgin untouched purity
                    the snow is here

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        3.         Angels in the snow
                    White crystals flashes
                    The children excited
 
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        4.         Blue gray clouds
                    Yellow ring around the moon
                    More snow coming
 





    04.12.2013
    A-L  Andresen :)

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Lester Cohen March 4, 2014 at 4:31 AM Anne Lise, thank you for your welcoming message and your kind words about my initial haiku posted. I will participate as much as I can. Your haiku was very enjoyable to read, I'm living in Thailand at the moment and felt a cool breeze here as I read your 4 poems. Les Cohen Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2014 at 8:08 AM - Pleased to hear some words from you and Thailand. -( I visited Thailand two years ago.....lovely land ) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath December 18, 2013 at 9:58 AM Beautiful sets of serial haiku worded with extreme beauty. Loved always, my beautiful friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2013 at 11:12 AM - Thanks for the nice visit and comments bl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Ainsley December 16, 2013 at 3:03 PM Wonderful image provoking old memories and creating new visions.Love your work A.L. Anne-Lise Andresen December 16, 2013 at 3:05 PM - Thanks for pleasant visit and nice comments Michael . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson December 10, 2013 at 1:10 PM I must admit that I really hadn't much appreciation for Haiku until I read these. They are so concise and marvelous in their descriptions--evoking strong feelings in my poetic soul. Thank you so much. Anne-Lise Andresen December 10, 2013 at 1:12 PM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Mark. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Patrick Boyle December 9, 2013 at 12:56 PM I love when a poem paints a picture and sets a mood. Thanks Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2013 at 1:07 PM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Patrick. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun December 8, 2013 at 8:58 AM Excellent chain of haiku this is my very dear friend Anne Lise. So love it and enjoyed. thank u so much for the vicarious experience provided by your very beautiful/creative words in this amazing poem of yours. Thank u so much! love and biggest hugs, Leonora Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 9:05 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Leonora. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Anne Rutherford December 8, 2013 at 6:37 AM Well written Haikus Anne Lise . The first snow is always so beautiful . Anne Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:29 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Anne. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Stephen Kilmer December 7, 2013 at 9:27 PM The ice crystals seem so fragile and simple at first glance, but closer inspection shows there true beauty and engineering. ~Kilmer Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:28 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Stephen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich December 7, 2013 at 8:15 PM my favorite is the first one. PERFECT on a day like today. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2013 at 8:28 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Andrea. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Jackson December 7, 2013 at 10:02 AM Loved the imagery. Best wishes Linda x Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2013 at 11:41 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Linda. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton December 6, 2013 at 8:00 PM wonderful imagery Anne Lise they brought a smile to my face good pen Shadow x smile hug Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2013 at 6:19 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 6, 2013 at 6:48 AM you take me there with sheer winter glow, anne...am loving this one!..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 6:51 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gerald Kithinji December 6, 2013 at 4:51 AM So that's it, eh? Thank you. Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 4:53 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Gerald. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dan Ravasio December 6, 2013 at 4:23 AM warm winter feelings Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 4:25 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Don. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey December 5, 2013 at 10:16 PM Yes I've heard that too, about the yellow ring around the moon mean showers are coming, and in the winter that means more snow! This is a tremendous poem my friend! I loved reading this illustrious piece Anne Lise, Great Work!! Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 3:03 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Russell. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards December 5, 2013 at 8:28 PM You speak of snow,........but you warmed my heart with these beautiful haikus !!! :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 3:02 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Carrie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn December 5, 2013 at 6:05 PM Nicely visual loved the lines it is simply put beautiful loved again, read it twice. cheri Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2013 at 3:02 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Cherl. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 5, 2013 at 10:05 AM A phantasmagoria of images by angels made! Excellent Haiku , dear Anne Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 10:34 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 5, 2013 at 8:55 AM very nicely penned Anne....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 8:57 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan December 5, 2013 at 8:47 AM I don't agree with the comment that your haiku aren't beautiful. They are, and they capture the beauty that winter can be, especially for someone like yourself who has intimate knowledge of the season and it variations. Fine work, Anne-Lise... Jack Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 8:56 AM - Thanks for pleasant visit and nice comments Jack . - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak December 5, 2013 at 7:51 AM We are waiting for snow and ice, is coming today, but I don't think it will be anywhere as lovely as this poem. Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 8:10 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Monterey. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chidozie Uche O. December 5, 2013 at 7:47 AM what a description and unique style of poetry dropped here. Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 7:50 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Chidozie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lekau Mamabolo December 5, 2013 at 3:33 AM That could be an exciting experience; interesting piece of work.... Lekau Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 3:35 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Lekau. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Chuck Melugin December 4, 2013 at 10:10 PM Anne Lise Your winter pen charms me again. Let it snow! Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 2:52 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Chuck. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones December 4, 2013 at 8:15 PM All are beautiful...loved the yellow ring around the moon..:-) Anne-Lise Andresen December 5, 2013 at 2:51 AM - Snow and winter .... some looking forward, others do not - thanks for pleasant visit Donna. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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