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- Haiku X 213 - In the Moss -

scary predictions
                             it shoots quickly with head spin -
                                    checking the makeup





16/10/21
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Romios Avatar
November 17, 2021 at 2:52 AM
Mucho Creative. Panagiota
Smith Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Don't know much about owls. We have some in NZ and you can hear their calls but they are like Kiwis hard to catch sight of. Wisdom has long been associated with owls. Nice write. Stay safe David in NZ
Daniel Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 2:05 AM
A great haiku, Sunshine:) hope you are doing well:)
Skelly Avatar
October 23, 2021 at 12:41 AM
Owls are truly wonderful, as is your haiku...Delice
Proxenos Avatar
October 19, 2021 at 10:48 AM
This deserves a win dear Sunshine Smile your poems always have depth. Love and hugs Jenny.
Horsman Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:45 PM
Great subject, complimented with great poetry.
Ball Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 7:20 AM
This is a pretty one. Love this pic. Love Owls. Great job here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, I have never seen an owl. Hugs.
Logan Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 3:50 AM
I’d have judged this a winner, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
November 18, 2021 at 5:53 AM
.... not the sponsor ... he did not like it at all
Allison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:32 AM
me too:-( hugs jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
October 17, 2021 at 1:40 AM
Lovely image Anne, used to see them in the early hours going to work. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Halloween is near. We admire the scenes. Hugs.
Allison Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:37 PM
sweet poem Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 4:18 PM
oh so cute, Anne-Lise!!
One Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:57 PM
ohhh this is a good one... very clever last line..
Goldsmith Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:29 PM
A "wonderful" write and picture. Good Luck. Have a great/blessed autumn day...................
Calasibetta Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Love the line "It shoots quickly with head spin"....Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Paulette
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