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- Haiku X 207 -Spring Anemones -

from root to flower

                                       angels whistling in the sky -

                                               underground power












27/03/2021
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Spring Haiku - Traditional Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
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Wild Anemones
3rd place in the contest
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Ball Avatar
April 6, 2021 at 7:23 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. Love the pic. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 5:27 PM
a really good and clever one. Congrats!
Allison Avatar
April 5, 2021 at 12:55 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win sweet Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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April 5, 2021 at 12:30 PM
Anne-Lise, congrats on your win with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
May Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Very nicely penned Anne, Congrats on your win...hugs
Kitchin Avatar
April 4, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your bronze placement with your beautiful haiku!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 3, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Lovely, dear lady! Breathtaking!
Proxenos Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 5:18 AM
An awesome, splendid example of what our Maker wanted us to see and admire, fascinating and so perfect. Love and hugs sis take care when are you going? Jennifer.
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March 30, 2021 at 9:52 AM
I find it fascinating that God creates so much that on the surface looks the same. But when you look close you can see that no two are the same.
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March 29, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Beautiful field of anemones. I have never had any luck with them. Your visits to my page are serendipitous. Sara
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March 29, 2021 at 2:02 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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March 28, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, i like the way you described the flower. Also I want to thank you for telling me of my mistake. I have corrected my mistake. Hugs Darlene
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March 29, 2021 at 3:04 PM
Heloo Sunshine smile, you are welcome. enjoy your evening my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend. Hugs. Darlene.
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March 29, 2021 at 6:46 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
Rose  Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 3:45 PM
I love the idea of angels whistling in the sky, beautiful imagery Sunshine, hope you had a great Sunday :)
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March 29, 2021 at 6:45 AM
- Vie Rose, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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March 28, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Just look at those beautiful flowers! I love the contrast between "angels whistling in the sky" and "underground power." Excellent haiku. Best wishes for a win in Tania's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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March 29, 2021 at 6:45 AM
- Carolyn, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 1:36 PM
very cool imagery, Sunshine. I like this one a lot.
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March 28, 2021 at 2:09 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 28, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is just lovely. Good imagery as well. Best wishes in the contest. Have great day:-) Alexis
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March 28, 2021 at 12:01 PM
- Alexis, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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March 27, 2021 at 11:47 PM
A carpet of beauty.
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 12:00 PM
- Yes, a beautiful carpet Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 11:14 PM
Great imagery, Anne-Lise, good luck
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March 28, 2021 at 11:59 AM
- Eve, many thanks for the lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
Allison Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 3:19 PM
they look so beautiful Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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March 28, 2021 at 11:59 AM
- They're beautiful, Jan ... like stars falling from the sky :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Logan Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 2:51 PM
It's a beautiful lush carpet of blossoms. Very nice Haiku, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 11:57 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Jenna :) - hugs // Anne-Lise
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March 27, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Dear Anne, this is Lovely imagery about spring. Best Wishes // Las
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March 28, 2021 at 11:57 AM
- Many thanks for the lovely comments, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 27, 2021 at 12:53 PM
Lovely image of spring Anne, they're beautiful flowers for sure. Good luck Tom
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March 27, 2021 at 12:56 PM
- Beautiful, but toxic ... but, I will not eat them - Many thanks for the lovely comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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