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- Haiku X 195 - Contrast -

snowstorm and black nights

                                  ice castles made for wonder ~

                                          an absurd contrast










                                             14/01/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                      Hi-Ku(7) Poetry Contest
                                   Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

                                    10th place in the contest

                                 Poem of the Day 16/01/2021
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Trifiatis Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 12:26 PM
I had characterized it as " Phantasmagoric " and was proven right! Congratulations on POTD, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Stark Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 5:48 AM
Sounds funny.. Isn't it??
Michael Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 4:53 PM
Black Ice...Nice imagery her...Congratulations Anne-Lise on POTD.
Proxenos Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 8:55 AM
Sorry dear sis Anne-Lise, such a delightful Haiku and I don''t congratulate you, a friend should never miss this honor bestowed on her special friend, but always remember this sis loves you. congratulations on your POTD Sunshine Smile - keep safe in this mad world. Hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2021 at 8:03 AM
- Thank you very much for visiting, comment and congratulations, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Schiavina Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Wonderful Haiku. Congratulations on your win and POTD.
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 8:25 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations X 2, Frances :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horn Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 7:16 AM
https://www.google.com/search?q=teardrops%20on%20my%20pillow Sad when all of the ice melts
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 7:34 AM
- It will not happen in my lifetime ... nor in the next generation, James ... I have no worries about the ice ... thank you very much for your visit to my poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 11:01 AM
great job and also I see it's POTD.Way to go and Congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 11:03 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 4:56 AM
Congratulations on having this beautiful haiku honored with POTD my friend! Blessings xxoo
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 5:52 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 3:13 PM
Circling back to enjoy your artistry again and congratulate you for a marvelous POTD! Hugs ~ John
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 2:25 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Beautifully written.
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 2:25 AM
- Thank you very much, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kavanagh  Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Outstanding Anne Lise absurdly incredible contrast, between picture and verse, 10th place and POTD, I cannot find balance, cheers David
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 9:44 AM
- Then we are 2 about that matter, David :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Big congrats on POTD! The poem and pic a delight!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:09 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 2:03 AM
Congrats on POTD with this lovely write - God bless you sweet friend
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:09 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nicole Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 6:52 PM
"Snowstorm and ice castles" Oh my !! Such beautiful images indeed. This photo matches your words perfectly. You have created a Masterpiece, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:09 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Brandy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Downing  Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Congratulation on potd, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:08 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 3:42 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, a beautiful scene ou paint with words. Hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, You are so welcome . Hugs Darlene
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:08 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 3:20 PM
cant believe I didn't comment ion this gem before, many congrats on POTD happy weekend Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:08 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Koplin Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Great one Anne-Lise! Congrats on POTD!!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:07 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 1:49 PM
Wow, what a beauty! And a POTD as well. Big congrats to you and a fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:07 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Anne-Lise, Awesome! hugs
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:04 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Doll Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Anne-Lise, brilliant haiku. Congratulations on your win. Sending an ice carver and countless warm hugs your way~ Warren
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:03 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. ~~
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:03 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 11:29 AM
Great Job Anne-Lise!!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:03 AM
- Thank you very much, Bobby :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ibeh Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Awesome haiku, Anne-Lise:-) Congratulations on your POTD recognition!
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:02 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Edward :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 9:45 AM
Great Haiku, Sunshine, congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 6:02 AM
- Thank you very much for congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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