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Fleson Postkortgalleri - HARTMANN, SUSANNA

- Haiku X 170 - Snow -

the sounds of their feet

                             fresh snow "creak" - starry - full moon

                                  - small gnomes with wool socks







30/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Deschler Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 9:14 PM
What a fun and whimsical poem for the winter season! A joy to read! ... Keep up the wonderful writing Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 12:50 PM
- Many thanks, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 5:15 AM
This was adorable without the graphic. With the graphic almost TOO adorable!
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 1:56 PM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:32 AM
Absolutely love the final line!
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:31 PM
- Many thanks, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 2:05 PM
What a lovely, cute picture you have projected, Anne-Lise!! Same can be said of the accompanying picture. Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 12:31 PM
- Many thanks, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
There Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 9:50 PM
A heartwarming image and haiku to match! Loved this : )
Andresen Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 2:26 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, H.T. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Trifiatis Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 4:13 AM
Phantasmagorical dearest Anne-Lise! A pleasure to read! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:38 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Na Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:20 AM
I enjoyed this Anne-Lise . Thanks for sharing
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:38 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 6:17 PM
Cute, gnomes also have to have fun.. Very good Haiku. Hugs
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:38 AM
- Thank you very much Eve, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Bauer Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 5:12 PM
i love the last line of this, anne-lise!
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:37 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Joyful write, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:37 AM
- Thank you very much for your visit and your comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise : )
Adams Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 3:56 PM
this one is adorable within your wonderful imagery is a lovely scene... love it my friend :) hugs
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:26 AM
- Many thanks, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Theraven Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 1:27 PM
Anne-Lise, Loving this stocking stuffer Haiku. -Richard
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 1:32 PM
- Many thanks, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Wonderful imagery my dear friend - oh so cuddly gnomes - best of luck in the contest! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 1:32 PM
- Not a contest poem, dear Jenny ... many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sands Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 12:45 PM
Oh so cute! I love it. :)
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 1:16 PM
- Many thanks, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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