Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 16 Kissing In the Rain -

Silver shiny, careful summer droplets
                    Caresses and cool their naked sunburned bodies
                                 He kissed away all the drops


                                     Tenderness in his kiss
                         The rainbow, sunshine, thunder and rain
                                   Covered her with his kiss






23.05.2013
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Nudershada Cabanes October 19, 2013 at 3:06 AM so Beautiful. love it! Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2013 at 3:40 AM - Thank you for your visit and comment my poem, N.C.! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shanity Rain September 2, 2013 at 4:22 PM I love this ! little words , but stunning for the reader ! Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 2:42 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Yvette!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu August 19, 2013 at 10:07 AM Wow! Creative, this is. Anne-Lise Andresen September 3, 2013 at 2:41 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Alozor Michael!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Edward Orozco June 14, 2013 at 10:09 PM Wow your poetry is really beautiful.. - Edward Anne-Lise Andresen June 15, 2013 at 1:54 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Edward !- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 2:28 PM Congrats on your winning work..I enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2013 at 5:44 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 4:59 PM Congrats on your win. AO Anne-Lise Andresen May 30, 2013 at 1:22 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:18 AM HI,,there sweetie, just dropping by to say congrats for your win. Anne-Lise Andresen May 29, 2013 at 1:19 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones May 28, 2013 at 1:36 PM I really do love your haiku's Anne Lise ..congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:24 PM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath May 28, 2013 at 10:45 AM Congratulation on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 10:54 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway May 28, 2013 at 10:01 AM Congratulations on win my friend Anne Lise...Have a blessed day always!! hugs, maria Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 10:15 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 28, 2013 at 7:40 AM congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 9:02 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Judy Konos May 28, 2013 at 6:13 AM Congratulations Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 9:01 AM - Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda May 28, 2013 at 4:34 AM This was beautiful-- loved the first stanza it gave me 'goose-bumps'. Wished I were that girl :) xx Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 9:02 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Noel Villarosa May 28, 2013 at 2:36 AM Congratulations on your win, Anne Lise. Nice entry. Thanks also. (^_^) Noel. Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:43 AM Thanks for visiting & congratulation - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:19 PM Anne. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 1:50 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise : Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:19 PM sorry about the syllable count... however... enjoyed the plot of your verse... xox

Douglas Fulghum May 27, 2013 at 7:00 PM Delicious, very nice Anne Lise. Good Luck on the contest. Loved it. Douglas Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 1:50 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Douglas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Bukang Liwayway May 27, 2013 at 7:22 AM hmmmm....Please don't disturb them hahaha have a cool/romantic day my dear Anne Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2013 at 10:07 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Connie Gildersleeve May 26, 2013 at 1:01 PM Words that spills out sensuality. Beautifully done and great metaphors. Best wishes in the contest. It should place very high I would think. Warm Smiles, Connie Anne-Lise Andresen May 26, 2013 at 1:03 PM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Connie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2013 at 12:30 AM Nice and romantic, sweetie. Anne-Lise Andresen May 26, 2013 at 2:45 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Toquyen Harrell May 24, 2013 at 11:22 PM Woo wi, don't know if I want to interrupt them. Very sensual, Anne-Lise :) Have a great weekend, my friend! Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2013 at 1:56 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Toquyen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Michael Ainsley May 24, 2013 at 4:56 PM Rainfall and lovers. always good stuff. Anne-Lise Andresen May 25, 2013 at 1:56 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Michael. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 24, 2013 at 11:14 AM Lovely xx Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 11:18 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Mandy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 24, 2013 at 11:01 AM so sensual and romantic Anne... A wonderful write....Thank you for your kind words....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 11:03 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito May 24, 2013 at 8:01 AM Sensuality's simple pleasures. The way it should be. An embrace of the sun & rain... Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 8:57 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Drake. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Elai Cee May 24, 2013 at 6:40 AM lol a love story starts with a magical kiss.---love this---ELAI Anne-Lise Andresen May 24, 2013 at 6:59 AM - Thanks for the nice visit, really appreciate your comments, Elai. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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