Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 163 - the Stone Age -

many stones lifted

                                     a cemetery for loss

                                      rest your wheels - amen







* NOT FOR CONTEST
07/09/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 2:51 AM Gorgeous poem, terrific photo. Wondering where it is! Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2019 at 3:01 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2019 at 5:39 PM you certainly captured that picture!!! Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2019 at 2:59 AM - Thank you very much, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alkas Poetry September 9, 2019 at 8:28 AM An image lives forever specially in a poem so imagery... congrats alkas. Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2019 at 2:59 AM - Thank you very much, Alkas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven September 8, 2019 at 10:13 PM Hi Anne-Lise, well, here I am and what do I see, a HAIKU. A brilliant picture, but, as as usual, an exceptional Haiku. You really know how to write these Anne-Lise. I love the content of this one. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen September 10, 2019 at 3:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael September 8, 2019 at 7:57 AM Lovely imagery... resting wheels Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 8:00 AM - Thank you, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues September 8, 2019 at 6:18 AM Wowie-wow! Great words and pic! You’ve outdone yourself, Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 6:29 AM - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin September 8, 2019 at 2:34 AM I think this is extremely creative, vivid feeling imagery. Me thinks it is is excellent. Good luck in the contest and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 6:28 AM - Not for contest, CayCay :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos September 8, 2019 at 1:51 AM Shame - this persons rock built car won't take him far, but maybe in the realm he has travelled to, he has! Unique entry for a contest my friend. Hugs, Jennifer. Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 6:27 AM - Not for contest, Jenny :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2019 at 5:20 PM I wonder if that is a final resting place for someone who loved the Volkswagon. Thanks for dropping by. Sara..I enjoyed reading your creative lines. Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 6:26 AM - Sara, many thanks for your visit and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham September 7, 2019 at 4:09 PM Love it , solid built car won't be going very far though. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen September 8, 2019 at 6:25 AM - Many thanks for your visit and nice comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2019 at 2:12 PM Awesome! Just look at that old Volkswagon. Those cars were built to last forever (had one in college). Very nice haiku and I especially like "rest your wheels...amen." I guess it's the same with people. If for a contest, this creative and unique haiku should do well, Anne-Lise! Hugs, carolyn Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2019 at 3:34 PM - No, this is not for contest :) - The advertising was true ... this car will last forever, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)