Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

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- Haiku X 140 - His Territory -

                                         ignorance is bliss

                                   baby bunny in the woods -

                                         monitored by lynx









05.11.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Syllable : 5-7-5

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Pashang Salehi December 14, 2018 at 1:37 AM Any difference between us and Azrael ... Anne-Lise Andresen December 14, 2018 at 3:14 AM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Pashang :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David William Breidenthal December 11, 2018 at 5:22 AM Awesome poem - a naturally grand write -JWE Anne-Lise Andresen December 12, 2018 at 12:36 PM - Thank you very much, J.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu December 5, 2018 at 8:47 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, the lynx, is hungry so she is waiting to strike. Have a nice evening my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2018 at 2:05 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman November 28, 2018 at 8:15 AM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Your metaphor and it's meaning with your Haiku says it all. It points toward the notion of the hierarchy of animals in the concept of evolution. Very ominous indeed for the Baby Bunny!! Superbly done and A FAVE from me!! Cheers and Best, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2018 at 1:08 PM - Hi Gary, many thanks for your visit, fave and the valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll November 20, 2018 at 8:45 AM A beautiful and dark haiku, Anne-Lise. An instant fav for me. Sending huge hugs your way. Warm wishes~ Warren Anne-Lise Andresen November 20, 2018 at 12:22 PM - I highly appreciate your lovely comment and the valuable fav., my friend Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 7, 2018 at 2:09 PM Aww so sad but it's survival of the fittest... and there will be more bunnies you know how they breed... I've never eaten rabbit:-) Hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2018 at 1:01 PM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven November 6, 2018 at 5:18 PM Hi Anne-Lise, your words paint such an ominous scene. I think I have to give the bunny a warning. Wonderful Kaiku once more Anne-Lise. You write these so creatively. A fave. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen November 7, 2018 at 2:25 AM - Hi Mike, many thanks for your visit, fav. and the valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 6, 2018 at 12:12 PM quite fatal is time... lovely write from you, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2018 at 2:09 PM - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2018 at 6:18 PM In this case, a short lived bliss. Enjoyed this one,Ana lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 6, 2018 at 7:55 AM - Many thanks for your valuable comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green November 5, 2018 at 8:30 AM Ignorance is bliss until he pounces. :) Nicely crafted my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 11:40 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 5, 2018 at 7:28 AM Shocking truth! Marvelously written dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugsxxx Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 11:40 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit November 5, 2018 at 6:30 AM Hope the bunny is alert now.. after hearing about your poem. You painted that scene cleverly, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 7:02 AM - Vijay, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso November 5, 2018 at 3:41 AM I was going to say "What a tasty poem!!! " Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 5:00 AM - I have never eaten a bunny ... :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael November 5, 2018 at 3:32 AM God knows who will be for dinner in this poem...then again a belly may be left hungry today... who's to say... Vivid imagery...All the best Anne- Lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 4:56 AM - I do not think a little baby bunny hunting a lynx, Arturo - But the lynx eats at least one bunny by the day/night :) - Thank you for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 5, 2018 at 1:46 AM Lovely image Sunshine, it seems cruel sometimes but that is nature. Hope the bunny got away. Tom. Anne-Lise Andresen November 5, 2018 at 1:56 AM - The little bunny was eaten ... with skin and hair - Inspired by a nature movie on tv yesterday :) - A very "sweet" dinner, Tom - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)