Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Haiku

- Haiku X 13- Boston Bombs -

One lovely ballerina
                                            The bombings slammed
                                                No more dancing






28.04.2013
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Arnab Mitra June 4, 2013 at 1:20 AM Concise and deadly sharp.. A good piece Anne-Lise Andresen June 4, 2013 at 1:36 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Arnab. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2013 at 2:02 PM again, your metaphors glide and deeply express this tragic scene with such agility, anne.. enjoyed passing through your past poems... sheer delight!.. happy day!..:) hugggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 1:46 AM - Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :

Kabuteng P.Ink K. May 13, 2013 at 1:05 PM That was such a sad day indeed and I think you captured one of the victims' stories well here-- thank you for passing by my poem... I hope all is well with all of you and belated Happy Mother's Day hugs to you! Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2013 at 2:48 PM E.P, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Katherine Braithwaite May 9, 2013 at 1:38 PM A fine poem Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2013 at 2:26 PM Katherine, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Suzanne Delaney May 2, 2013 at 12:16 AM That captures the brutality of these terrorist. Contrasting the most fragile image with the most brutal...well done SuZ Anne-Lise Andresen May 2, 2013 at 11:26 AM Highly appreciate your visit and thank you left a comments Suzanne. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 1, 2013 at 11:24 PM Tragedy expressed in so few words! Excellent! Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2013 at 11:35 PM Demetrios, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Erich Goller May 1, 2013 at 3:42 PM that's was a sad event, lets hope it won't happen again,thanks for sharing it,God bless you,Hugs!Erich Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2013 at 11:17 PM Erich, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres May 1, 2013 at 10:01 AM Sad event...so very sad and cruel. Your haiku says so much ... Anne-Lise Andresen May 1, 2013 at 10:28 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kash Poet April 30, 2013 at 12:45 PM Good haiku here Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 12:49 PM - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Kash. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath April 30, 2013 at 8:39 AM The affect of bombing nicely depicted with the example of one lovely ballerina. You always use golden words with beautiful imagery. Thanks....., loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 9:22 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Emily Schaffer April 30, 2013 at 5:30 AM I'm sure they think it's harmless, but now-a-days everything's about having fun but they're taking it too far. Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 6:22 AM Thank you for taking the time to respond Emily. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Emily Schaffer April 30, 2013 at 5:31 AM Btw, this is a response to you're comment.

Laura Breidenthal April 30, 2013 at 3:02 AM Hit right to the core, Anne-Lise. I love your poetry. You are truly gifted at gripping the reader. A true tearjerker this is...something we can relate to emotionally what with the Boston bombing...etc... Always, Laura Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 3:08 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Laura. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sallam Yassin April 30, 2013 at 2:53 AM ugly face of terrorist distortion of beauty nice haiku Anne thanks to share Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 3:07 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Sallam. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam April 30, 2013 at 12:34 AM Excellent. Simple and deep haiku. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 1:14 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Ravi. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A April 29, 2013 at 7:31 PM Very deep Anne, not a pleasant memory on the topic... always~ Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 1:14 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Linda. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Danielle Deason April 29, 2013 at 3:57 PM I''m doing great anne :) how are you? everything here has been going pretty good, just tons and tons of end of the school work, it is horrible but we got to pass these tests haha Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 1:12 AM It is is sure go fine - just do your best - Good Luck !!! Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Danielle. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud April 29, 2013 at 2:37 PM still touchin gme as i re-read this again and again, anne... have a great day!...:) hugggs! Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 1:16 AM I have many others to choose. / / Thanks :) - oxox// Anne-Lise :)

Emily Schaffer April 29, 2013 at 10:02 AM I really enjoyed this haiku, seeing as there are so many at my school already making fun of it. I can't understand how they could be so heartless and it was nice to see that someone else felt differently :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 10:08 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Emily. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin April 29, 2013 at 7:01 AM Yes, her swan song. Enjoyed. Love, daver Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 7:07 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Daver. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shining Bright April 29, 2013 at 6:35 AM Short and POWERFUL! Great! Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 6:57 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Persian. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter April 29, 2013 at 6:27 AM Darn...you really hit hard with this one, Anne...well done! Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 6:56 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Caleb. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Van Breda April 29, 2013 at 3:12 AM Such evil, poetically penned. This really got to me too. Wrote a haiku about it at the time "Tempered Grace"-- thanks for always stopping by my poems xx Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 5:11 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Delysia Hendricks April 28, 2013 at 8:54 PM Sooo sad. I abhor violence in any form. Nice haiku, Anne-Lise. :) Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 1:07 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Delysia. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2013 at 8:31 PM such a sad one. Thanks for thinking of Boston, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 1:06 AM - Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ale A A April 28, 2013 at 5:32 PM These few words are so heart wrenching and lovely at the same time. Thank you. Anne-Lise Andresen April 29, 2013 at 1:06 AM Thank you for your visit and your comments my Haiku poem Abigale. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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