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Heaven lights up
                                     Air is filled with sulfur odor
                                           Beautiful fireworks




01.01.2013
A-L  ANDRESEN :)
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Mohammed Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:17 PM
Clever haiku dear Anne.
Andresen Avatar
August 1, 2013 at 3:21 PM
- Thanks for your comments and your visit, Mustapha. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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May 8, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Yes, Time starts from 00.00 giving good in one side and bad in another side. Heaven lights up but produces bad smell of burning sulfur. Oh! nice philosophy depicted in this exquisite haiku. Loved always, bl
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May 8, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Heemstra Avatar
January 17, 2013 at 3:34 PM
It was the title that caught my attention The wife and I just started watching the fourth season of "24." Thanks for your comments as well it's a different world out at sea
Andresen Avatar
January 18, 2013 at 2:18 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Robert. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Kearley Avatar
January 14, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Yes,yes... :o) oxox f.e.f <3
Andresen Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 1:53 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dan. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)
Spencer Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 7:44 AM
What lovely imagery and what a great way to greet a new year! Thanks for sharing :)
Andresen Avatar
January 13, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Thanks for your comments and your visit, Hannah. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 11, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Enjoyed this haiku. love phyl
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January 11, 2013 at 12:35 PM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, Phyllis! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 11, 2013 at 4:02 AM
Oh, this is extremely fascinating poem to welcome the New Year my dearest Anne-Lise. Sorry I've missed to read it. Wishing you again all the best this new year! love always, Leonora
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January 11, 2013 at 6:57 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, Leonora! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 9, 2013 at 12:42 PM
Refreshing way to greet the new year...... With a Haiku.... Great write and thanks for your support for my work.... It means a lot to me..... Love You dearly.... Jake
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January 9, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, John! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 8, 2013 at 3:44 PM
Happy New Year to you and Arild. I enjoy reading your poems.
Andresen Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 1:34 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year, Joann! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roske Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 11:22 AM
I love your title - Happy New Year Anne Lise!
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 7, 2013 at 6:50 AM
A New Year's Eve celebration, nicely written Anne. I hope 2013 will be full of health and happiness. Warm Smiles, Connie
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January 7, 2013 at 6:53 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 6, 2013 at 10:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku poem, thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2013 at 10:08 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Haick Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 11:58 PM
: ) New Year's Eve! The fireworks are always fun...wakes up the child in me. Love your Haiku. Love, Annalise
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January 6, 2013 at 4:22 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 4, 2013 at 5:41 PM
Love it :)
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 3:05 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 3:57 PM
nicely penned Anne....best wishes
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2013 at 3:05 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Scott Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 6:53 AM
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE GOOD TO SEE ONE IN SUCH HIGH SPIRITS XXX DAVIDSCOTT
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 12:11 PM
good title on this start to the NEW YEAR.
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 11:54 AM
I love a good fireworks display. Nice haiku! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Cavanaugh Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Short and beautifully descriptive poem.
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Moore Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 8:49 PM
A celebration to start aknew! Happy Holidays! Thanks for your comments...Hugs, Holly Moore
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January 3, 2013 at 2:58 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Carey Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 2:15 PM
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2013 at 2:57 AM
Thanks for visiting and Happy New Year! - @ - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 2, 2013 at 9:04 AM
Wish I could have been there...I went to bed at ten (Lord, I'm getting old!) Fireworks kept me awake! (I'm an old grouch too) Awesome haiku, Anne...have a blessed 2013 my friend! - Tim
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Thanks for your comments on my "new year's haiku" - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Tim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Carrillo Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 8:42 AM
This is very nice. Here we didn't see many fire works. It was and is still raining. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Thanks for your comments on my "new year's haiku" - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Lucilla. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ellison Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Here's wishing you a bright and prosperous 2013 for you and yours my dear friend Anne-Lise Love, Jack xoxoxox
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Thanks for your comments on my "new year's haiku" - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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January 2, 2013 at 1:53 AM
Great!! Enjoyed watching the fireworks Yesterday...Have a fruitful New Year my dear friend Anne Lise. Hugs, Maria
Andresen Avatar
January 2, 2013 at 4:04 AM
Thanks for your comments on my "new year's haiku" - Looking forward to many pleasant poems and comments from you in 2013, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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