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                       Cypress Gardens in Moncks Corner near North Charleston, South Carolina:

- Haiku X 101 - the Nature -

Breathe the scent peaceful

    The perfection on my tongue ...

    reverently kneel










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  26.01.2017
  - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Michaels Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 4:41 AM
You do such a great job of conveying the scene within the boundaries of the form. Excellent!
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2017 at 11:50 AM
- I love Haiku poems, John :) - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 6:39 PM
Nature does bring reverent awe at times. Only the senses can experience what words fail us to describe. Beautiful a 7. Hugs, SuZ
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 6:17 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and your comments, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Sunshine I like your nature poem.I am glad that you like my Owl poem.I gave your poem a7
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 2:05 PM
- I love the nature and animals, Darlene - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:41 AM
Very beautiful Haiku Anne- Lise!:) Beautifully written poem, dear friend:) Delightful picture of nature as well!:)Just awesome! Enjoyed it! A 7! Sending you my love and prayers.Best wishes to you always!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D
Andresen Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 12:28 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Dorian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Wow a beautiful picture along with this awesome haiku. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 1:26 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Wow! Nice one! A meditation!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Your welcome, Anne-Lise! xo
Rodrigues Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Your welcome, Anne-Lise! xo
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2017 at 2:21 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:07 PM
You know, this would indeed be a beautiful place to kneel in worship, Anne-Lise!! Beautiful.
Andresen Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 6:04 AM
- Andrea, thanks for visiting and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 10:04 PM
Meaningful and perfect hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:01 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 8:14 PM
Brilliantly beautiful my Dear...
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 7:01 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 10:00 AM
Very nicely penned Sunshine
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 1:25 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Breathtaking.
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 1:25 PM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 6:01 AM
Both your poem and the picture are outstanding Anna-lise! So serene. : ) 7
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 7:20 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 3:06 AM
I kneel before your Haiku dearest, Anne-Lise. A seven.
Andresen Avatar
January 27, 2017 at 7:18 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and lovely comments, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:20 AM
lovely 'ku; i feel this is a prayerful write, anne... happy huggs!
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 1:38 PM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Looks like a great fishing hole:) That scent is so familiar, I can smell the mud from here. Lovely haiku, Anne Lise.
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 1:38 PM
- Thank you very much, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:17 AM
Very lovely A-L
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 1:37 PM
- Thank you very much, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Lovely peace and lovelier its beauty ...
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:59 AM
- Thank you very much, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 5:56 AM
Anne Lise, love the sweetness of your thought and words.. I'd want to be in the scene. :) And I'm sure your love story is wonderful too.. hug and smiles, Olive Eloisa :)
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:58 AM
- Thank you very much, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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