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Haiku woo

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    her archive 'hind hern 
  stepping closer into mine
   her wincing now smiles

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Joe Maverick

Date: 6/5/2024 10:53:00 PM

I can imagine a slow mincing..Dance like Trance like? Moulding of twain.'

James Peranteau
Date: 6/6/2024 8:29:00 AM

lol...mincing? think uv "Jane", az in "Tarzan and Jane uv the jungle" ;) I don't see mine muse in this write az "mincing", she'z no weakling...where[?] iz 'the admire' uv the hers sir, if shes were not already moulded(not the fan uv "Clemens")...I'm the artist dear poet, I luv learn, and i luv sharing it (my way here)...much love