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Haiku VS Senryu

Impetus of spring
   Beget invigorate life --
       Fruition with hope.

Shrill winds rip, tear, cry
   Heated verse under the sheets,
The songs of love grow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 9/9/2012 8:34:00 AM
amazing stuff man!
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Date: 6/5/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2012 2:34:00 AM
Amy congrats on your it..David
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Date: 6/4/2012 12:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:28:00 PM
Very dynamic one, that second one! and the first one very lovely. Congrats on your win, Amy.
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Date: 6/3/2012 6:13:00 PM
AMY, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD
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Date: 6/4/2012 6:15:00 PM
People here really seem to enjoy both forms. In fact if you go through your poems you'll probably see they have more views than any other form- perhaps due to how short they are... or not... but it's really good exposure for poets and it was a brilliant idea. Think I may do the same thing, or close to it.
Date: 6/6/2011 11:11:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Amy, I like it.
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Date: 1/30/2011 10:15:00 PM
Absolute expression!!! An exquisite example of the form.
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Date: 1/8/2011 12:41:00 AM
Can't come soon enough for me. Nice haiku.
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Date: 12/27/2010 10:04:00 AM
Kudos Amy
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Date: 12/20/2010 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Amy. Dan C
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations Amy on your poetry's honored place. "You Go girl! Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/4/2010 2:19:00 PM
Congratulations Amy, on your 2nd place with with this beautiful haiku
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Date: 12/1/2010 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:46:00 PM
excellent Amy, love this to bits, congrats on your win. Harry
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Date: 11/27/2010 8:20:00 AM
Heartfelt Congratulations, Amy on your 2nd place in the Poetry Soup Contest. Spring returns with its vitality, invigorating our spirits...making hope blossom in our hearts. Your lovely words have touched me deeply. I hope you are enjoying your Thanksgiving Holiday. thanks for your kind comments. God bless and smile. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 11/25/2010 3:10:00 AM
Amy - Many congrats on winning coveted second spot in contest....your hope has really fructified. Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/24/2010 9:11:00 PM
many congratulations Amy. well done. Margaret
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Date: 11/24/2010 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win with this wonderful Haiku Amy.
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Date: 11/24/2010 1:34:00 PM
Super congrats on your 2nd place win with this lively haiku, Amy! --nikko :)
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Date: 11/24/2010 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations, Amy! Way to go. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/23/2010 6:52:00 PM
Amy, this beauty promises such hope! I love it! congrats! jimbo
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Date: 11/23/2010 5:34:00 PM
A big congratulations to you. QUite an honor, dear lady! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/23/2010 5:28:00 PM
A lovely Haiku Amy.And well worthy of your 2nd place win.Congratulations.Love June (Sylvia)
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Date: 11/23/2010 12:31:00 PM
hooray for your 2nd place win!!! What a honor to win, well deserved!! d:)
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