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Haiku Vs Senryu

Impetus of spring
   Beget invigorate life --
       Fruition with hope.



Shrill winds rip, tear, cry
   Heated verse under the sheets,
The songs of love grow.

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Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/9/2012 8:34:00 AM

amazing stuff man!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/5/2012 6:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Amy. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 6/4/2012 2:34:00 AM

Amy congrats on your win..love it..David

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 6/4/2012 12:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Great write!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2012 6:28:00 PM

Very dynamic one, that second one! and the first one very lovely. Congrats on your win, Amy.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/3/2012 6:13:00 PM

AMY, Congratulations with this enjoyable & Excellent entry! My contest was so much fun. I am so glad my senryu and haiku mix, contest did not fail, as I thought it would. ~always :-) PD

Amy Green
Date: 6/4/2012 6:15:00 PM

People here really seem to enjoy both forms. In fact if you go through your poems you'll probably see they have more views than any other form- perhaps due to how short they are... or not... but it's really good exposure for poets and it was a brilliant idea. Think I may do the same thing, or close to it.

Zahra Akbar

Date: 6/6/2011 11:11:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Amy, I like it.

James Burns

Date: 1/30/2011 10:15:00 PM

Absolute expression!!! An exquisite example of the form.

Joe Inka

Date: 1/8/2011 12:41:00 AM

Can't come soon enough for me. Nice haiku.

Andrew Totten

Date: 12/27/2010 10:04:00 AM

Kudos Amy

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 12/20/2010 3:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Amy. Dan C

John Freeman

Date: 12/20/2010 8:29:00 AM

Congratulations Amy on your poetry's honored place. "You Go girl! Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/4/2010 2:19:00 PM

Congratulations Amy, on your 2nd place with with this beautiful haiku

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2010 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/28/2010 8:46:00 PM

excellent Amy, love this to bits, congrats on your win. Harry

Andrew Crisci

Date: 11/27/2010 8:20:00 AM

Heartfelt Congratulations, Amy on your 2nd place in the Poetry Soup Contest. Spring returns with its vitality, invigorating our spirits...making hope blossom in our hearts. Your lovely words have touched me deeply. I hope you are enjoying your Thanksgiving Holiday. thanks for your kind comments. God bless and smile. Peace and Love, Andrew.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 11/25/2010 3:10:00 AM

Amy - Many congrats on winning coveted second spot in contest....your hope has really fructified. Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta