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Haiku - Vjk

vibrating bird wings
jabbered song birds at hummer....
katydids echo  



Written: August 11, 2018

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2018

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September 19, 2018 at 12:40 PM

Lovely imagery Sara, many congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Jan xx

September 24, 2018 at 9:16 AM

Jan, Thanks for the visit to give congrats. Sara

September 17, 2018 at 9:34 PM

Sara, congratulations on your win with your expressive haiku! I love your use of "vibrating," "jabbered" and "echo."

September 19, 2018 at 2:53 PM

I know, right? I visited a friend who had humming bird feeders lining the front porch. As I stepped up to the porch approaching the front door I didn’t realize the porch was filled with humming birds. Surrounded by the humming and the birds darting I felt like I was in Alfred Hitchcock’s “The Birds!”

September 18, 2018 at 9:17 AM

Mark, Thanks for dropping by with congrats on my work. Those hummers sound like a very large bird when they swoop in and those wings vibrate. Sara

September 17, 2018 at 8:27 PM

Congrats on your win, Sara.

September 18, 2018 at 10:07 AM

Line, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

September 17, 2018 at 7:54 PM

Great Haiku, Sara, congratulations on your win. ~`* Hugs Eve

August 18, 2018 at 10:27 AM

clever write here, my friend - I have to admit, I couldn't understand what to do for Harry's Captcha contest...LOL

August 12, 2018 at 3:26 PM

Nice haiku - you stuck to 5 7 5 which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

August 13, 2018 at 11:16 AM

Matthew, Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment. Sara

August 11, 2018 at 6:34 PM

Well written verse, Sara, and best for a win. I saw a hummingbird at the park today and it flew so fast it disappeared. Hugs Eve

August 13, 2018 at 11:16 AM

Eve, Yes, those hummers have the speed and can escape in a heartbeat. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

August 11, 2018 at 6:22 PM

great job, Sara. Love that last line especially

August 13, 2018 at 11:18 AM

Andrea, We don't see or hear katydids here very much but there sounds at to a summer day. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

August 11, 2018 at 8:22 AM

percept-words....striking effect

August 11, 2018 at 9:11 AM

SB, Your presence at my work is uplifting. Glad that you saw the striking effect. Sara

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