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Haiku Untitled Was Too Cold

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too cold fingers
maneuvering pen 
poor wren has only one wing

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(c)sally Young eslinger 1/14;2021hu

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Mystic Rose Rose

January 15, 2021 at 5:52 AM

Oh my beautiful poetess, one can only imagine what one can do with one wing. You can fly to the other side of the moon, caress the sun and bathe in the stars, its all up to you. Sending you the other wing via energy and love, my dear. Hang in there Sally, join me in meditation at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ybZC0mgq4bY we are all united under one wing of protection. Much love xo

Sally Eslinger

January 15, 2021 at 8:24 AM

Your inspiring comment has lifted my being to a height of Joy nearing the sweet flow of tearstat comes at the rise to touching God. Bless you! I will go toteutube. Big hugs Rose Rose!

Victor Buhagiar

January 14, 2021 at 10:53 PM

wren with one wing. Lovely image and metaphor. ~~

Sally Eslinger

January 14, 2021 at 11:05 PM

Hi, Victor, thanks. Sorry, tho I think you read the version with the typos just as I was editing. Wrens are lovely but hard to draw even when Jim doesn’t turn the heat down. Blessings to you!

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