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Haiku Trip 1

Dawn styles bright Misty sunrise patterns; A new day hurls ~~~~~~~~~ Crisp paper mosaic Haiku trip here; Zen posture ~~~~~~~~~ Autumn winds plough Cold distractions; Dawning agenda ~~~~~~~~~ Suburban houses Somnolent senses; Private excursions ~~~~~~~~~ Wet rain drizzles Sun in light pitch; Yin-Yang moment ~~~~~~~~~ Dog barks Borders drawn; Autumn epiphany ~~~~~~~~~ Peanut butter Multi-grain bread; Breakfast entertainment ~~~~~~~~~ Simple set-up Quaint stalls; Bargains shout ~~~~~~~~~ Leon Enriquez 14 May 2018 Hamlet Place, ACT

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 8:30:00 AM

Amazing haikus. Well-written and long, the way I like them as a whole. Simply super! -JWE

Leon Enriquez
Date: 5/29/2018 2:38:00 AM

Dear JW Earnings: Thank you so much for your very kind comments. I am at the moment staying in a suburb in Canberra, Australia where my son is studying for his masters. I wrote these haiku fragments after visiting the seafood market and observing the vicinity of the houses and hamlets for about 3 weeks. Then, in a brisk outpouring, these haiku fragments arrived one late Monday evening. All the best then, Leon.