Haiku Trail

rotten old giant teems with new life anyway living in the past a rock thwarts progress and it also holds things up ~ location is king a weed and a tree all that distinguishes them ~ the passage of time a very small vine can bring lofty ambitions crashing to the ground a trail to nowhere is so named by one who lacks imagination delight is highly contagious, spread by children unmasked in the woods
---------- for the UPTO YOU Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand written on 02/10/23
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Goldsmith Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Creative Haiku writes. I am with Gershon. The 'trail to nowhere' I love the best. You are Not lacking imagination. Have a great/blessed day...............
Daniel Avatar
February 11, 2023 at 12:19 AM
Amazing haikus, Jeff:)
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 2:11 PM
The 'trail to nowhere' is my favorite. ~ Imagination Cap on
Lawless Avatar
February 10, 2023 at 12:28 PM
that last one has a strangely metaphoric tone to it Jeff,
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