Haiku To Heaven

It's all about.....
shedding one's skin,
and revealing the heart 
(within)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 9:52 PM
A stunning haiku Keith. Your lovely thoughts expressed through beautiful content and imagery. Warmest wishes ~Susan
O.J. Hunt Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Tis good to think with your heart....thanks for your cherubin visit Susan;-)
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Beautiful haiku
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 8:14 PM
What a nice thought, Keith. WAs this for Brian's contest?
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Thanks Andrea, no I didn't enter a contest. God bless:-)
Vaso Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 5:37 PM
I really liked this Haiku, well done!
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Short, but lovely and creative, Keith. Regards // paul
Raven Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:43 PM
Hi Keith, i cannot resist a well written Haiku Keith. I really think yhis form is special. It takes a true poet to encompass a whole thought in such few words. This has to go into my Haiku faves and it is a seven. Your Friend....Mike.
Salehi Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 6:42 PM
I am smiling through my heart....
Andresen Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 3:17 PM
- Beautiful haiku, Keith ... and it rhymes so nice :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 10:01 AM
Lovely, Keith!
Lamoureux Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Love it!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 12:09 PM
Glad you enjoyed Richard, one of my first haiku's:-)
Anish Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:45 PM
Unusual for a haiku to rhyme! You did it well! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 12:07 PM
Thanks Matt, glad you enjoyed:-)
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