Haiku: the Evening Sky

The evening sky glows 
with orange swirls and pink puffs.
Dessert is now served.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Farmer Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 3:48 PM
A lovely association of an outdoor grandness with something you can sink your teeth into, so to speak, with the additional feeling that nature is serving it all up.
Duraiswami  Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful poems Madeline! Keep it going! God bless you!
Gifford Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 8:45 AM
A Beautifully written Haiku, Madeline. Nicely done. Have a wonderful day.
Mckeithan Avatar
January 29, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Wonderful haiku and great imagery
Mills  Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Beautiful imagery. Perfect haiku for the day!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 3:18 PM
Cool haiku!
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 12:41 PM
- :) ... thank you, I enjoy it ... (tasty) ... beautiful, Madeline :) - hugs
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