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Haiku - Tears of Time

as the heavens cry
tears slip between each petal
the earth breathes new life

03/05/2018

flowerlifenaturerainseasonshaiku

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Line Gauthier

January 15, 2023 at 8:39 AM

lovely ~

FJ Thomas

January 15, 2023 at 10:28 PM

Thank you again :)

Alkas Poetry

January 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM

celestial tears tanned by petals falling to the earth that springs the wonder of transformation... Perfection dear, salute alkas

FJ Thomas

January 18, 2021 at 6:11 PM

Thank you dear Alkas :)

Terry Shuff

December 22, 2020 at 10:07 AM

Perfect.

FJ Thomas

December 22, 2020 at 12:47 PM

Thank you Terry. I appreciate it ;)

Akkina Downing

December 5, 2020 at 8:08 PM

WOW! Simply beautiful and cleverly done. I loved it :)

FJ Thomas

December 6, 2020 at 11:34 AM

Thanks so much Kina!

Kai Michael Neumann

January 3, 2020 at 4:43 AM

Brilliant. Happy New Year to you and Happy Writing, Kai

FJ Thomas

January 4, 2020 at 11:08 AM

Thank you Kai!

Jw Nugent

June 21, 2018 at 8:36 AM

Very traditional Haiku

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 1:01 PM

Hi JW :) Thank you.

Kedar Ingale

June 5, 2018 at 4:57 PM

Beautified the rain in three simple lines.Every word in that poem is like a wand doing magic

FJ Thomas

July 9, 2018 at 1:01 PM

Thank you so much Kedar :)

J Hamilton Gist

May 16, 2018 at 6:56 PM

Inspirational...

FJ Thomas

May 17, 2018 at 8:15 AM

Thank you again J; and for giving so much of your time to me. I look forward to reading your work.

Debbie Duncan

April 24, 2018 at 11:53 PM

Very nice :)

FJ Thomas

April 25, 2018 at 9:08 AM

Thank you Debbie :)

Kumkazi Mhlongo

April 9, 2018 at 7:18 AM

Delightful, simply sublime!

FJ Thomas

April 9, 2018 at 9:46 AM

Good morning Kumkazi; thank you :)

Oliver Mckeithan

April 7, 2018 at 3:46 PM

Wonderful Haiku. Like the relationship between crying and new life. Oliver

FJ Thomas

April 7, 2018 at 6:52 PM

Thank you so much Oliver :)

Eve Roper

April 6, 2018 at 11:35 AM

Back to say awesome Haiku Hugs sweet lady

FJ Thomas

April 6, 2018 at 7:58 PM

Hello dear Lady! Thank you Eve :)

Robert Johnson

April 6, 2018 at 10:43 AM

That is beautiful.

FJ Thomas

April 6, 2018 at 7:57 PM

Thank you very much Robert :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

April 6, 2018 at 10:18 AM

Profound imagination, unique imagery, insightful! When rain is poured on land there is growth and life.. When tears are poured out there is relief, healing, bliss and a new life is emerged.

FJ Thomas

April 6, 2018 at 7:57 PM

Ahh you've said that so beautifully Besma. Thank you.