Haiku Tavern

lover a tavern
                                        wine of delight in her lips
                                               stupor a poem








© rajat kanti chakrabarty
4th December,2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Deschler Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Love can make a poet write words of silly nonsense, sometimes... A very creative haiku this is. Good work, Rajat!
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Thank you Kelly. Love and Hugs! ....rajat
Trifiatis Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 11:39 AM
A wonderful Haiku though the situation described not that pleasing, my dear friend, Rajat! love!
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 7:20 AM
Thank you for your lovely comments.Love. RAJAT
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:12 AM
Excellent pen my dear friend Rajat! Love your unique poetry style! A 7 for me! Have a lovely weekend! :) love and hugs! xxxx D.
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 8:29 AM
Love D. Wish you a lovely weekend XXX rajat
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 10:06 PM
VERY interesting one. you have quite the way of thinking!!
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Hi Andrea. Love XXX rajat
Meade Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 9:19 PM
I will drink to this . . . just need to stay off the roads -- stupor can lead to death.
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December 5, 2014 at 5:01 AM
Hahaha Meade you must stay off the road or... you know. Love XXXX rajat
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