Haiku Suite

Haiku 2 Do About U Should I tell U how Love 4 U within me sings? Swinging scatted tune Haiku About U Sound brought me 2 U Feelings for U clear and pure Dulcet notes on glass Haiku II About U Time always 4 U Time 4 Me? When U want 2. Metronome off cue Tru Blu Haiku Customer Service Counter for unwanted things Symphonies in blue Haiku What U Do U caused me true pain My heart a minor etude Composed in lieu of rain Blue Haiku N Rue Silence with me now Heart pacing on shards of glass Strewn beneath its feet

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/13/2020 6:37:00 AM

You have your own style. I like it.

Mari Banks
Date: 10/13/2020 7:16:00 AM

You are kind to say so. That means a lot. Thank you!

Edward Orozco

Date: 6/15/2013 9:32:00 PM

Well done :)- Edward

Mari Banks
Date: 10/13/2020 7:15:00 AM

Thanks so much Edward!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/22/2013 3:34:00 PM

lol.... I love the way you did these haiku... in style... lovely, and sad at the same time... sad when someone makes you feel like this,, after all the good feelings... Mari, I love what I read,,, Adding you to favorite poets on the soup... I keep tabs on all my favorites... hope to see more of your poems soon... always~ LINDA

Mari Banks
Date: 1/27/2013 9:26:00 AM

Wow Linda. I always wanted to be somebody's favorite! Thanks so much for making my bucket list dream come true. :OD m P.S. Thank you for being so supportive to so many of us here. You make hurt poets heal. ;O)

Ayesha Karim

Date: 1/14/2013 8:35:00 AM

These are good Haiku poems. I write Haiku poems and Prose poems you should check out some of my poems. I like the concept that connects your Haikus very nice!

Mari Banks
Date: 1/14/2013 6:34:00 PM

Thanks Ayesha! I will check you out!