Haiku Suite

Haiku 2 Do About U

Should I tell U how
Love 4 U within me sings?
Swinging scatted tune

Haiku About U

Sound brought me 2 U
Feelings for U clear and pure
Dulcet notes on glass

Haiku II About U

Time always 4 U
Time 4 Me? When U want 2.
Metronome off cue

Tru Blu Haiku

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Symphonies in blue

Haiku What U Do

U caused me true pain
My heart a minor etude
Composed in lieu of rain

Blue Haiku N Rue

Silence with me now
Heart pacing on shards of glass
Strewn beneath its feet

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Date: 10/13/2020 6:37:00 AM
You have your own style. I like it.
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Mari Banks
Date: 10/13/2020 7:16:00 AM
You are kind to say so. That means a lot. Thank you!
Date: 6/15/2013 9:32:00 PM
Well done :)- Edward
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Mari Banks
Date: 10/13/2020 7:15:00 AM
Thanks so much Edward!
Date: 1/22/2013 3:34:00 PM
lol.... I love the way you did these haiku... in style... lovely, and sad at the same time... sad when someone makes you feel like this,, after all the good feelings... Mari, I love what I read,,, Adding you to favorite poets on the soup... I keep tabs on all my favorites... hope to see more of your poems soon... always~ LINDA
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Mari Banks
Date: 1/27/2013 9:26:00 AM
Wow Linda. I always wanted to be somebody's favorite! Thanks so much for making my bucket list dream come true. :OD m P.S. Thank you for being so supportive to so many of us here. You make hurt poets heal. ;O)
Date: 1/14/2013 8:35:00 AM
These are good Haiku poems. I write Haiku poems and Prose poems you should check out some of my poems. I like the concept that connects your Haikus very nice!
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Date: 1/14/2013 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Ayesha! I will check you out!
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