Haiku -- Streams

Streams: It's so improbably wonderful that
the trickle of a lazy stream can eventually
join the chorus of a powerful ocean.


ocean's lions roar

  above mighty sea birds soar
  
     streams trickle on in






               August 03, 2020
 Traditional Haiku - Nature Themed Contest
             Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
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Y. Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Hi Gershon, I just love the wonder of nature. This poem reminds me of why I do. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 4:16 PM
Thank you for such a lovely, supportive comment. Really, really appreciate it. Warm wishes and Happy Monday evening, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
August 3, 2020 at 10:41 AM
Interesting haiku Gershon, watched a tv program about the nile and the source was just a trickle, the wonders of nature. Tom
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August 3, 2020 at 4:16 PM
Was it I who posted the message about turning off commenting?! lol. That's the last thing I'd ever do... Oh, well. Ain't we got glitchy-glitchy fun?! :) gw
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August 3, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Just after I posted this a message came up, poet has turned off commenting, still gremlins in the works.
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