Haiku Soul

door closed monk stands straight
                                        gold keys sun ray ricochets
                                    soul opens world breathes peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 6:07 PM
love that line, sun ray richochets. It sounds awesome.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Thank you sweet Andrea. Love ....Rajat
Andresen Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 11:18 AM
- Love this one, Rajat ! - Very well done !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your excellent comment. Love XXX rajat
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 10:21 AM
My dear friend Rajat! I really enjoyed reading your excellent haiku! Nicely penned! A 7 from me! Wish you a great week ahead! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:45 AM
D my friend thanx ..Love xxx rajat
Meade Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 10:15 AM
You have outdone yourself -- this is truly a beautiful piece of work -- I love the connection with soul, nature, spirituality, and peace. You have woven a song!
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:46 AM
Thank you David. Love XXX rajat
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Very good work..It is Senryu like as well..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Chakrabarty Avatar
November 25, 2014 at 10:47 AM
Sara thanks. God bless. Love Xxx rajat
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