Haiku Soul

door closed monk stands straight gold keys sun ray ricochets soul opens world breathes peace

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/24/2014 6:07:00 PM

love that line, sun ray richochets. It sounds awesome.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:43:00 AM

Thank you sweet Andrea. Love ....Rajat

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2014 11:18:00 AM

- Love this one, Rajat ! - Very well done !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:44:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise for your excellent comment. Love XXX rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/24/2014 10:21:00 AM

My dear friend Rajat! I really enjoyed reading your excellent haiku! Nicely penned! A 7 from me! Wish you a great week ahead! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:45:00 AM

D my friend thanx ..Love xxx rajat

David Meade

Date: 11/24/2014 10:15:00 AM

You have outdone yourself -- this is truly a beautiful piece of work -- I love the connection with soul, nature, spirituality, and peace. You have woven a song!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:46:00 AM

Thank you David. Love XXX rajat

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2014 9:37:00 AM

Very good work..It is Senryu like as well..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/25/2014 10:47:00 AM

Sara thanks. God bless. Love Xxx rajat